You and Me

I got the last line from the song "All Around Me" be flyleaf!! They are ausome! Check them out on Mtv.com!!!

 

 

When you're far away from me.

I don't feel like myfelf.

Not fully anyway.

It's like you're part of me.

And when I'm with you.

I'm whole again.

We stand in the rain tonight.

I shiver as I stand beside you.

Looking out into the rain feeling

like we should be in it.

But we're under the stadum.

And as I lean yp agenst you.

I feel your hard chizeled chest.

Under that t-shirt.

The same one that I'm wearing.

But we're not alone.

The way I'de like us to be.

I think to myself" how romantic would

this be if other people wern't here."

Saddly they are.

But that doesn't matter.

I'm with you and that's all that I care about.

WE stand under the stands and you

have your arm around my waste.

I feel your warm hand stroking me.

So I put my hand on yours.

To reasure you.

Not only beacuse I want you to 

have my hand touching yours.

But somehow it makes you feel like

your doing the right thing.

So we stand here.

I feel the eurge to turn and kiss you.

But know that I can't.

For you see Luckae won't allow PDA.

So I will save our first kiss for another time.

Even though my thouge dances behind my lips.

 

 

Author's Note

I hope that the poem wasn't confusing!!!

Reviews

[Nita]

Ahh, Erin this was fantastic!
Spell check, please. Or I'll help you with it, of course.

[vampireprincess]

great awesome really cool keep on writing and i will keep on reading

[Loribeth215]

Hmmmmm.... there was a lot of good atmosphere. I was a little confused about whether the characters were in the rain, or just looking into it. And, just an aside, we all make mistakes.... run your spell check.

All in all, it was well done and very tender. You conveyed the tension of the piece very well.