The Death

The Death

A Poem by Bananabacon
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If you ever had a friend who was close to death. You will fit right in with this poem. And you will know how I felt.

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I wish one day emos wouldn't

be put down.

They go thew all sorts of depression.

She doesn't know how many

people love her.

Until she's gone.

Then you here a shot in the darkness.

Then your world falls to peaces.

How did this happen to a

girl like that?

Now she's in this coffin.

I'm looking down at her and

I'm saddened.

Everyone around me is crying.

Then they shut the coffin and put

her in the ground.

She was only 13.

now she's left me all alone.

I guess that's what she wanted.

© 2008 Bananabacon


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my bestfriend passed away from cancer when she was 16yrs old,i looked at her when she was in her coffin,it's not a very pleasing feeling..very toucing poem

Posted 16 Years Ago


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Added on August 22, 2008

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Bananabacon
Bananabacon

Monroe, NC



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I'm really cool!! I lived in FL!!! I love the beach and it's my last name!!! I LOVE poetry!! It's so fun!! If you haven't tried it you should. I've been to Canada!! Add me to your friend list or what .. more..

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