Becoming Punk

It's strange how some parents don't understand their kids. But what can you do. Their just being protective.

Learking around every corner.

Wondering what my mom would say.

Being punk isn't that bad.

Yes it leads to being gothic.

But what if you don't go that far.

It's like being in a deep ocean 

and your in the middle.

Not knowing if your going to sink.

Some people make fun of you.

I guess it's because they don't get

what you're all about.

You're like a little stray cat.

Lost and alone.

Sometimes you just want to cry out

In the dark.

You want to turn back but

you know you can't.

Then again it's cool.

The music is great.

It' explains so much about your life.

And when your with the right people.

You feel like you belong.

And the people you're with.

Their family.

They never talk down to you.

They might freak everyone els out.

But they're the nicest people.

Being punk isn't all that bad. 

Author's Note

I know that I spelled some words wrong but hey I'm new!!

Reviews

[Ayza Soza]

first off thanks for the review of my work. i appreciate it :)

okay, so normally I'm not very good with reviewing poems, but this was one I was able to relate to easily. :)

I've been to many punk shows, and I completely agree with what you've written in your poem. Punks may come off as scary to others, but they are very nice and accepting people.

kudos for expressing that very nicely. :)

[Nita]

Hey Erin *coughBananabaconcough* It's Sokkfeet! I loved this poem, it was great.
Please work on your spell-check, it drives me up the wall. I could Beta for you (spell-check) if you want me to.

[THE LOST ROSE]

Nice write. Please post more. I enjoyed reading the discovery you came across with.