I am the last of my line.Strictly speaking, that is not entirely
true.My brother and I are the last of
our line.He and I are both unmarried
and childless, and not likely to correct that deficiency.My sister has children and
grandchildren.But they of course don’t
carry the name.Nor do I expect they
feel much connection to their mother’s maiden name or who held it beyond their
aunt, uncle and grandmother.When my
brother and I meet our end, so will the last of our name and that particular
line on the family tree.
I
have no desire for immortality, in the purest definition of the word.Why would anyone want to actually live
forever?Sure, it would be cool to be
around for the next great re-interpretation of rock and roll, if space tourism
ever becomes economically viable, or if the Republicans stop denying climate
change.But I don’t have that kind of
retirement funds and I don’t care to work, literally, forever.Similarly, I can’t fathom those whose desires
for immortality manifests itself in that impure definition; fear of death.It’s not as though I’m anxious to die anytime
soon, or that I would be ok with a painful and/or frightful death.But people die, the world keeps spinning and
life goes on.
It
is in that respect, the life going on, that I am jealous of my sister.She knows her life will go on forever in her
children and grandchildren.The only
real immortality lies with those who will remember you when you are gone.And if no one will remember you after you die,
or worse, if no one wants to remember you, then you don’t just die.It’s as if you were never even here.
I
know a great deal about my mother’s life; from her childhood pets that her
mother didn’t like in the house, to her first husband who spirited her, and his
mistress, off to live in Rome within weeks of their wedding, to how my father
was so unlike her first husband in that when my father said he was going out
for smokes, he invariably came back in the normal amount of time it should take
one to get smokes, rather than ending up across state lines in jail.I know so much about my mother’s life for one
particular reason.I asked.I know almost nothing of my father’s life for
one regrettable reason.He never gave me
any reason to want to ask. Stuck soundly in the muck that was his
misery, he neither ran from his demons nor ever tried to understand them enough
to cast them out.
It
wasn’t until after his death that I started to want to know, to ask.But there were few to ask, and certainly not
Dad.The grave is silent.Even in life, though, he was only slightly
more forthcoming than the grave.Few, if
anyone, ever really knew him.Many who
knew him didn’t like him very much.Myself included.Some hated him.
My
father buried his own father in an unmarked grave.My grandfather’s worldly possessions at the
time of his death amounted to a total of $7.23 in assorted paper and coin, a
check for $7.76, a couple of rings, a tie clasp, a billfold, a change purse and
personal papers.He died alone and was
found only when someone smelled the decaying corpse in his rented room.
I’m
not saying that will happen to me, but I’m also sure it’s not completely
outside the realm of possibility.I’m
nearly 48, and given the hearty, immigrant, dirt-farmer ancestors from which I
sprang, I’ll likely live to be close to 100, barring a bus accident.Who’ll be there in 50 years, except my dog
and the inevitable twelve cats, to mourn my passing? To remember my life? To
see my mortal remains laid to rest in the manner I would wish? To inherit and
cherish my favorite books, my grandmother’s rings and linens, my journals and
the makeshift scrap-book/diary that I started to write down my own poems in
when I was 11?
If
I don’t tell the world that I was here, the day will surely come when the world
will never know I was here.Just as
surely as the world has already largely forgotten that my father and his father
were ever here. Maybe I’m giving my
ancestors and myself too much credit.Maybe the world doesn’t give a rat’s a*s that I ever existed.Or that my grandfather, in his unmarked
grave, ever existed.By all accounts, he
was an a*****e.
But
I give a rat’s a*s.No life should be so
inconsequential as to end in an unmarked, unmourned, grave.Good man or bad man.Drunkard or tea-toter.Doting daddy or absent sperm donor.Evil or divine.I am the last in line left to tell their
stories, and through them, my own.
I find this very well-written and interesting, following a line of thought that I'm no stranger to. Of course it may be fiction, but I suspect there's at least a kernel or two of truth. My father was very proud of the Dickens name and always concerned about its survival. One of three brothers, only he had any children. Of my brother and me, only I had any male children. The burden got passed down, and my middle son, after producing two girls, finally gave me a grandson. Somewhere beyond the veil, father smiles. From the sorry look of things, (aforementioned republicans denying climate change, etc) our race won't be around much longer, so none of it will matter. Even so, I also give a rat's a*s. Creating writing, art and such, is a pretty good insulator against the reaper, in that it keeps a bit of us alive long after the dirt is thrown in.
Thank you! It's not fiction. I wish it was. I find your writing masterful, so to have you say tha.. read moreThank you! It's not fiction. I wish it was. I find your writing masterful, so to have you say that mine is well-written and interesting is high praise.
I love the sentence, "If I don't tell the world that I was here...". I'm in the same situation you are: no kids, so I sure can relate to your essay. Maybe that's why I recently became interested in genealogy. Sadly, like you, I have no one to ask the questions. My mom is still alive, but dementia causes her to be forgetful. For reasons I don't know, I wasn't interested ten years ago when she told her tales of the past.
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We are very much in the same boat. I've been tracing my genealogy for several years now and have hi.. read moreWe are very much in the same boat. I've been tracing my genealogy for several years now and have hit some brick walls. That is what inspired this piece. And, unfortunately, we share a mother with dementia. My mom's is only mild right now, but I've decided to start chronicling her life now, while she her long term memory is still largely intact. I intend to post stories of my experiences as I learn to be her caretaker.
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That's great. Cause I've decided to subscribe to your writing.
I see no reason why you have limited your readership by marking this as for mature readers. It is a good, well-written piece and deserves a wider readership. I say this as one who posted a story a few weeks ago (not sexual content at all but references to violence) and only received a reasonable number of views when I changed it to suitable for everyone.
I find this piece connected to the core of human mortality and the question of life and the soul. I believe it is true what you said when you said that "No Life should be so inconsequential as to end in an umarked, unmourned, grave". Every person's life is important and even if you don't realize it your life has touched someone else's weather in a good or bad way. I have memories of random people I have met just once and what they said lingers with me. Your soul is ever changing by the occurrences in your life and just one encounter can lead a person on a completely new path. You may not have children to bare your legacy but your existance has come into the thoughts and minds of others in the time you have been given and that in itself is a life worth living and has meaning. By writing this you already have created a memory in my mind so thank you :)
I find this very well-written and interesting, following a line of thought that I'm no stranger to. Of course it may be fiction, but I suspect there's at least a kernel or two of truth. My father was very proud of the Dickens name and always concerned about its survival. One of three brothers, only he had any children. Of my brother and me, only I had any male children. The burden got passed down, and my middle son, after producing two girls, finally gave me a grandson. Somewhere beyond the veil, father smiles. From the sorry look of things, (aforementioned republicans denying climate change, etc) our race won't be around much longer, so none of it will matter. Even so, I also give a rat's a*s. Creating writing, art and such, is a pretty good insulator against the reaper, in that it keeps a bit of us alive long after the dirt is thrown in.
Thank you! It's not fiction. I wish it was. I find your writing masterful, so to have you say tha.. read moreThank you! It's not fiction. I wish it was. I find your writing masterful, so to have you say that mine is well-written and interesting is high praise.