Butterflies ~

AN OLD WRITE.."BROUGHT BACK TO LIFE"..

Blood flowed through infinite fragile paths

 butterflies tapped inside a satin heart

innocence  fluttered in struggle ..to be


  Tethered and blind in a void without time

alone between fate and heaven's wake


Warmed  with whispers and wishes sweet ?

then found wanting .. put out and away ...

conveniently..to sleep...

J.J.

Reviews

[horizon]

i connected myself with the picture...and i just wonder how wonderful it would fell when a life is born in our own body...it might be a wonderful feeling..we can feel each and every single movement...magical time..i just can't define my words for this piece i am feeling so touched right at this moment....i am in love with the idea of thinking how it would feels being a mom...great words you left me blank...

[J. J. Nightingale]

Thank you for reading my words... It is a magical time...a blessing......... Jazz

[Mary]

Am I reading your beautiful poem correctly? Mystery of new life snuffed out. Your poem is beautiful, captivating, passionate and heartbreaking all at the same time. Amazing, Jazz!

[J. J. Nightingale]

Yes... about abortion..I am Pro-Life .... Thanks Mary............... Jazzy

[emmajoy]

Your words have touched my tears.. dear friend.
Such empathy, almost an urgency to say how it can be. Have read many of your posts, know your dear friendship... this post is YOU.

[J. J. Nightingale]

...............♥...............Thank you my friend..♥

[Richard🖌]

The Chinese (perhaps, the oldest culture on earth) believe when a person is birthed into the visual world, it is their first birthday, or that their true birth was at conception.
I think this is a matter of defining semantics, as when life is sparked, it is life, regardless its age.
Your butterfly analogy fits this premise perfectly, in a far more beautiful poetic voice … bless the innocent infant born in its mother's warm and loving, protective womb.

A tear brimmed this olde bard's eye, down over his heart.
Softly and wondrously spake, Jasmine … I reverently bow! ⁓ Richard

[J. J. Nightingale]

Thank you kind Sir.. .. I am, and always will be, PRO LIFE.....................Jazz

[Richard🖌]

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[J. J. Nightingale]

...♥.......................

[Richard🖌]

あなたは私の心にキスした

[J. J. Nightingale]

心は愛です....................

[Richard🖌]

愛は人生です⁓です、あなた、素敵な女性です！

[J. J. Nightingale]

アーメン .......................

[Richard🖌]

暖かいあなたの ⁓*

[J. J. Nightingale]

Mani fredde cuore caldo............♥

[Richard🖌]

Un cuore caldo rende tutto bagliore *

[J. J. Nightingale]

Right ...... ♥♥...............

[Richard🖌]

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[Phill Oz O'fee]

Ancient writers held diverse views on the subject of the beginning of personhood, understood as the soul's entry or development in the human body. This composition highlights the reasoning to support conception as the beginning!
Wonderful write and thoughtfully structured.

[J. J. Nightingale]

Thank you for understanding my views... and for your comment ............ Jazzy

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Butterflies might seem fragile, but they want not only to live, but to fly---and each new human life has the same goals, i believe...

j.

[J. J. Nightingale]

Yes.. I am pro-Life .. I value every minute, every day.. Life is a gift, not to be tossed aside, at will.....Thanks for reading my words............J.J.

[horizon]

your words are very true...and motivating...