One Enchanted Evening

I appreciate Mr. Richard Rogers for inspiring this title and for all those who sang the song "Some Enchanted Evening" :)

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One Enchanted Evening

a dory small 

two   -   still fishing 

quieting their universal substance

so to understand the fueling  

of red wine as 

bold and joyful as blushing cheeks

a certain apprehensive bliss

where thoughts become thin white wisps 

melting into the blue drifting twilight

lapping ocean sighing

two oars tapping 

into the hinterlands

One Enchanted Evening

08/22/23

E

for Sherry

Author's Note

Reviews

[Cherrie Palmer]

This poem was a delight to find and I for one couldn't be happier for you my dear friend.
Gene this was romantic smooth and full of new life and inspiration.

[Einstein Noodle]

you have blessed me my friend! very happy you found this one touched you .. love is a many splendored thing :)))))))))))))))))))))
E.

[Neville]

darn near blindingly beautiful my friend .. I wanted it to go on and on .. N

[Einstein Noodle]

doesn't it???? ;) love and joy brother .. thanks so much for taking time .. glad you enjoyed the scene
E.

[Tom]

Spellbound here afloat this enchanted lake, two lovers delight in the moment and why not? ' Tis what dreams are all about!!

[Einstein Noodle]

yes it is ...i so agree with you Tom ... for the young and young at heart :)))) so happy you were put in the moment
E.

[Sami Khalil]

"where thoughts become thin white wisps
melting into the blue drifting twilight"

[Einstein Noodle]

thanks Sami! :)

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome muchly

[Sami Khalil]

Title and poem are soooo lovely; you must have caught the love bug under the "Blue Moon".
Stay happy my friend, stay blissful.

[Einstein Noodle]

thanks Sami ... yes love bugs can bite very unexpectedly can't they .. no matter place, time hearts .. it's what lends bliss during seemingly dark times isn't it!? thanks for stopping by to read and share your thoughts!
E.

[Sami Khalil]

Wow! So true and well said. You are welcome sir Einstein.

[Patricia Wedel]

dearest Gene… the Blue Moon and I found your poetry to be amazing in the Night Sky… wishing you mysterious adventures with a touch of Romance 💘 as the Ripples of Light dance 💃. gently, Pat

[Einstein Noodle]

your reviews always tickle me Pat ... our super blue moon last month was spectacular wasn't it!? thanks always for your support .. right here at the Cafe'
E.

[Chris Shaw]

A beautiful love poem. Two lovers, in a small boat, on the ocean, listening to the gentle lapping of salty water. So calming and in such a wonderful setting. Your posted image is as enchanting as your words. The red wine would have added to the ambience. Lovely work Mr E.

Chris

[Einstein Noodle]

thank you Chris .. super happy you caught this one .. living so close to the sea and all kinds of boats in the bay .. thank you

[Rachel Fitzgerald-Feele..]

Can feel that calm moment when everything is let go and you're at ease. A lovely read Gene.

[Einstein Noodle]

super happy you felt this poem in such a way .. i don't write many "love" poems .. i am gratified you found it as a calm and lovely moment .. rest of the day to ya lass! :)
E.

[Betty Hermelee]

Daydreaming into the sunset, momentary notions, as the boat plows along with wispy clouds and two oars… with some wine to make it a “one enchanted evening”
Simply lovely E.
Warmly, B

[Einstein Noodle]

thank you Betty .. we do need our moments in the moonlight don't we!? did you catch the Blue Moon last night?
E.

[Betty Hermelee]

Unfortunately not; you’re very welcome E
Warmly, B

[Bhuyanshi Talukdar]

A feeling of being transported into a magical moment, like one enchanted evening.

[Einstein Noodle]

you got it! ;)))))))))) thanks for taking time and nice to meet you!
E.