Faith Hope and Charity

Faith Hope and Charity

A Poem by Einstein Noodle
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a challenge from a friend to write these .. three haiku .. hope they speak to you. :)

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Tree in desert stock illustration. Illustration of desert - 82795539
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Faith, Hope and Charity 


Faith

shapeless water falls
veiled mist rises over rock
pools on shaded ground

Hope

Mountains crumble down
River silt rich dark with bone
Springs fruit not planted

Charity

Earth turns on axis
Self imploding creatures spin
Forests giving green

10/28/2021
E.





© 2021 Einstein Noodle


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I like your beautiful Haiku words….and how they
embrace each other, Faith, Hope and Charity, you use vivid imagery in all three….your description of faith is visual, your description of hope is depicted through a kind of tragedy, but with hope that life will be better, and you describe charity as a way of giving life by nourishing the earth with greenness.
Fine job.
Best
B.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Einstein Noodle

2 Years Ago

thanks for taking time Betty! I couldn't be happier to have gotten those points across .. haiku are .. read more



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Drawn into hope - how apt, descriptive as Haiku should be creating a moment of mental bonding across the miles. I love how our work can travel time and distance into the minds of the reader.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Einstein Noodle

2 Years Ago

power of the pen brother .. power of the pen ;) thank you for checking this one out
E.
Creative triple Haiku indeed. I do love the theme and your use of imagery.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Einstein Noodle

2 Years Ago

thanks so much for taking time Brianna ... i'm an undisciplined person and sticking to a form and th.. read more
An evocative Japanese trio. Poetically expressed in suitably succinct fashion! You did well!

Posted 2 Years Ago


Einstein Noodle

2 Years Ago

thank you very much Robert! ... i was challenged to do this and it was a bit of a struggle for me .... read more
excellent haiku's! I enjoyed these very much! Loved how you approached these with faith, hope and charity, very original!

Posted 2 Years Ago


Einstein Noodle

2 Years Ago

i was challenged to write them by a friend and welcomed it as i have been on such a dry spell for mo.. read more
Patricia

2 Years Ago

Well you rose to the challenge and succeeded. I’m a bit dry myself. I’m in a flat line place, no.. read more
Einstein Noodle

2 Years Ago

yep! :))))))))))))))))))))))
Lovely poem .. Clever use of the words..Really enjoyed this read as my last read this morning before going of to practice piano..Chopin..this morning.
Thank ou for sharing your thoughts..
Lisa, now in Spain

Posted 2 Years Ago


Lisasview

2 Years Ago

Good observation.. might inspire a GRAND poem..
Einstein Noodle

2 Years Ago

:) ........................
Lisasview

2 Years Ago

Yes..........back
A great use of nature. Water so soft and flexible but it can cut the hardest rock, earth and the symbolism of creation all wonderfully crafted and merged.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Einstein Noodle

2 Years Ago

thank you soren ... i appreciate you taking time to read and let me know your impressions .. that's .. read more
This is really amazing, love the flow of your words.
I love Haiku's, especially when they just blend in form like this one.
amazing write here

Posted 2 Years Ago


Einstein Noodle

2 Years Ago

once again i am in your dept Ms. Poet! thank you so much for spending time .. haiku are wonderful ar.. read more
Unspoken poet

2 Years Ago

I love haiku's they are fun to write and you are most welcomed
And all the time Mother Nature keeps her pattern of nurturing us all. Faith and hope, two very fragile things but nevertheless everything at times and the bounty of maintaning such is to see life is a balance. Balance is key. The sun always follows a storm :) A delight to reflect on these haiku dear E :)

Posted 2 Years Ago


Einstein Noodle

2 Years Ago

yes! balance is a key to living a peaceful, healthy life .. balance with moderation in all things sa.. read more
Love the images your words conjure in these very creative haikus. The veiled mist over rock pools, the fertile, dark, enriched, life giving soil and green forests being spun by magical creatures. Indeed, nature is a lesson in faith, hope and charity!

Posted 2 Years Ago


Einstein Noodle

2 Years Ago

it tickles me ol' heart to know you see what it was I tried to do in this ... thanks so much Divya! .. read more
Beautifully written and presented my friend! I always enjoy reading haiku and senryu and they are not that easy to write. You "done good!" ~Sharon

Posted 2 Years Ago


Einstein Noodle

2 Years Ago

Sharon, you bless me with this review ... thank you very much for taking time and sharing your thoug.. read more

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