The Rose ... a collaboration with Lingering Soul

She woke delightfully from her dream

Unfurled her curves and gown without a seam

She knew times beyond her dawn

In lustrous color and wilder form

At bay side waters she sat alone

Whistling tunes of meadows many tones

Splashes of blue ...splashes of red

from shore to shore she lifts her head

Maybe a lonely night was through

A day has made a difference too

As romance stood shading her

Lovers leap and passions stir

A gleaming fragrant morning glow

Sheds petals of pure rain in wind and snow

Having pushed through tired rock and soil

Imbuing thoughts of linens' lemon coyle

05/28/2019

Lingering Soul and E.

 

"Top definition ... Coyle's are placed throughout the world to spread joy and happiness and to bring wit and pleasure ... AH, she was a lovely coyle, so charming!!"

Author's Note

Reviews

[jacob erin-cilberto]

love the allegory here...just a rose, or not?
a song from a beautiful flower, heartwrenching...janis, such a beloved blues/rock singer, but in her own world...struggling with loneliness...so unsure of life and why she is in it...
this is really powerful my friend...
you and Lingering Soul sound as one here...you are both such strong individual voices, but combined...?

Wow!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[B]

Thanks J :)

[Einstein Noodle]

and wow for your review, jacob! thanks so much! and you added a whole other dimension relating it to janis ... honestly had not had her in mind when writing .. but should have ... one of my all time favorites for her music and the statement of her living ... so glad you decided to stop to read this my friend ... working with Lingering was a delight ... made easy by her Soul ;)))))))))
E.

[Chris Shaw]

What a delightful collaboration between the two of you. Appears seamless, wouldn't know who wrote what lines. Beautiful poetic expression in this lovely visual read. Thank you. A pleasure to read.

Chris

[B]

Thanks Chris

[Einstein Noodle]

and thanks from me too Chris! Lingering Soul was totally compatible with me and a delightful inspiration ... the rose is very well worn and we wanted to make it fresh somehow ... so glad you enjoyed reading
E.

[Chris Shaw]

I did enjoy the read Mr E. The pair of you write very well together. A delight for your readers. I adore roses and you did bring something new and fresh in your lines. Have a wonderful day.
Chris

[Coyote Poetry]

This is poetry my friend. You two did a outstanding job. The words alive, beautiful and you made the reader believe every word. Thank you for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[B]

Thank you C

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome my friend.

[Einstein Noodle]

hey Coyote Man!! much appreciation for your time here sir! peace and love
E.

[Neville]

I have been waiting for these words for such a bloomin long time, it seems... and would you know it, no sooner was I out of my nightgown and breakfasted, I found myself drawn to this very page... a seriously good collab my very good friend, but no surprises there...when you post, this reader is never disappointed.. thanks to the pair of ya and true..... Neville

[B]

Thank you Neville

[Neville]

my very sincere pleasure and true... Neville

[Einstein Noodle]

Neville ... you are the best my friend .. a steadfast supporter ... thanks so much brother! so happy you enjoyed reading :)
E.

[Neville]

................... :)