A glass of wine before bed. I admire such a common picture captured so tidy in poem. "Less is more" is a real thing here.
And i love the sweet little rhyme at the end. 😊
Blessings
Posted 6 Years Ago
6 Years Ago
thank you for reviewing Ms. Early! and i am so happy that the rhyming (which interjected itself) ;).. read morethank you for reviewing Ms. Early! and i am so happy that the rhyming (which interjected itself) ;) is pleasing to you .. i am not good at strict rhyme but it happens now and then ;) thanks for stopping my new found friend...see you 'round eh!?
E.
Awhh.. a rosy cozy poem of feel good..I so enjoyed the warmth oozing from these simple yet beautiful words..all is right with the world when wearing rose colored glasses. Well at least sometimes. Nice work my friend
Posted 6 Years Ago
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6 Years Ago
yes ... that's why we all should keep a pair around .. says i! ... they can even heal a jaded nihili.. read moreyes ... that's why we all should keep a pair around .. says i! ... they can even heal a jaded nihilist ;))))))))))))
thanks Fran .. i am smiling that you enjoyed ...
E.
I really like this, we see things differently some times when we wear those glasses.
:) Rose coloured glasses are better than beer goggles. (:
Posted 6 Years Ago
6 Years Ago
ahahaha perhaps ... but a nice stout ale among friends is pretty high up there ;) i am so happy you .. read moreahahaha perhaps ... but a nice stout ale among friends is pretty high up there ;) i am so happy you are back at the Cafe'!
Rose 🌹 wine is quite the aphrodisiac when skies are blue and melancholy. truly, Pat
Posted 6 Years Ago
6 Years Ago
yes it is Par! i only drink wine with friends .. otherwise i know i would finish the whole bottle me.. read moreyes it is Par! i only drink wine with friends .. otherwise i know i would finish the whole bottle meself ;)))))))))))))))
thanks for reading and your wonderful thoughts
E.
I love the way you tie together a collection of some recognizable relatable ideas that are connected by being part of a rosy view of life. I love the way you use the rose color in a variety of ways. I've recently OD'ed on the negativity, so I unplugged my phone (robocalls), stopped watching the news, & now I'm full-time weirdo wandering thru the wilderness on a burro with no name *heh! heh! heh!* Fondly, Margie
Posted 6 Years Ago
6 Years Ago
Couldn't find a burro; here's a horse you can ride through the desert, though:
A Hors.. read moreCouldn't find a burro; here's a horse you can ride through the desert, though:
Rose colored glasses, just $50! https://www.diffeyewear.com/products/daisy-gold-red?gclid=Cj0KCQiA8f_eBRDcARIsAEKwRGdqYA2ShHx5nOC4Ng6juQE8VRfPPm22ZH6SiQEOW7Dxmf-3kyunWpIaAv3SEALw_wcB
6 Years Ago
Nice, and very relatable, E.N....keep that Alzeimer's at bay, man. I'm fighting that battle, also.
6 Years Ago
You got it! One of my favorite songs! *wink! wink!* Thanks for sharing!
thanks guys!! Barley Girl you are the best! ride that burro honey ride!! i'm with you 100% ...it is .. read morethanks guys!! Barley Girl you are the best! ride that burro honey ride!! i'm with you 100% ...it is way too distressing and is making everyone mad and sick of it ... blah blah blah ... news people and most politicians think we are so stupid ... let the vote decide ... the hell with vitriolic rhetoric ... facts and acts are what count! i am in my jammies ... had me coffee ... took out the doggies ... its a glorious pre-dawn day ... soon enough leaves will be off our forest trees that i will be able to see the dippers ... they remain obscured all summer ... but venus and you are always their dear friend ;)
E.
ps. thanks angel! glad you can relate ... we fight on together then eh!? ;) sure appreciate your visit
6 Years Ago
WOW! I'm floating away as I read your descriptions of the pre-dawn morning puttering & imminent leaf.. read moreWOW! I'm floating away as I read your descriptions of the pre-dawn morning puttering & imminent leaf dump at your place, E! *smile*
thanks Coyote Man! you can borrow my pair anytime .. actually i have several ... so you can keep one.. read morethanks Coyote Man! you can borrow my pair anytime .. actually i have several ... so you can keep one ;) even the darkest days can be rosy eh!? so happy you enjoyed sir!
E.
It seems as we age, the act of readying for and going to, sleep, contains differing expectations
An escape for some a concern for others.
Your wine and cotton are a pleasant prelude to whatever comes next.
Dave
Posted 6 Years Ago
6 Years Ago
ahahaha well.......... let the imagination run wile says i! ;) thanks for taking time and reviewing .. read moreahahaha well.......... let the imagination run wile says i! ;) thanks for taking time and reviewing john .. much appreciated!
E.
A glass of wine...merlot or chardonnay....to calm one's soul before sleep. "in vino veritas" as a friend of mine used to say....in wine there is truth. A kiss from one who is no longer with you perhaps....and a sweet reverie. Something warm and fuzzy about this poem, E. I enjoyed it. Lydi**
Posted 6 Years Ago
6 Years Ago
hm "...warm and fuzzy" ...... you got the picture my friend! thank you for reading and i could not b.. read morehm "...warm and fuzzy" ...... you got the picture my friend! thank you for reading and i could not be more gratified with what you take with you from this poem.... warm and fuzzy foreverrr! ;)
E.
I love this poem its so simple and quaint and brings back memories of how I could drink oh I do miss it lol
I don't drink for medical reasons now but how I remember wine before bed lovely.
you wrote this well x
thanks so much Jules ... i couldn't ask for more in a poem than to move you to a lovely place ... lo.. read morethanks so much Jules ... i couldn't ask for more in a poem than to move you to a lovely place ... love love love :)
E.
6 Years Ago
hugs sometimes the shortest sweetest poetry the best
i think if we go to bed feeling peace, we wake up that way as well...and it makes for better, more rosy days...at least those of us who share this optimism hope so.
j.
Posted 6 Years Ago
6 Years Ago
yes ... just let me wear them please!!! putting them on before bedtime is the perfect plan jacob ..... read moreyes ... just let me wear them please!!! putting them on before bedtime is the perfect plan jacob ... i keep mine at bedside ;)))))))))))
thanks sir ...for spending time on me streets
E.
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