Earth and Sky

Earth and Sky

A Poem by Einstein Noodle
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a haiku

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Eagle wings spread far
Cast shadows on earth from sky
Sharp talons take food
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8/26/18
(I hope you can take time to sit and listen to the video too)

© 2018 Einstein Noodle


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I love this video I have watched it many times before and I’ve watched the bald headed eagles in Alaska the most beautiful powerful mystical being ever- sacred to the cultures up Nirth- their piercing cries warns and challenges the spirit as the fly free the king above many- one thing in life we can only be certain of is change- not always easy but best for growth and destiny- difficult paths lead to beautiful places- from pain comes beauty- wonderful words-🌹

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Einstein Noodle

6 Years Ago

yes yes yes! you capture my full intent ... i found the video after the haiku and was as stunned by .. read more



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Wow u so good at haikus too. You captured the scene aptly and awesomely and in a creative way wowww. Kudos and got to read more, this isn't enough from your ink.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Einstein Noodle

6 Years Ago

wow! thank you so much for this very encouraging review my new found friend! really happy that you e.. read more
A magical write...and the music in this video is mesmerizing. Unfortunately, the words are cut off on the right. Such a majestic creature, the eagle is. Lydi**

Posted 6 Years Ago


Einstein Noodle

6 Years Ago

hmmmmmmmmmmmmm the video has become enlarged somehow???? i may have to re-post it .. thank you for s.. read more
Liberty in sky
Eagles soar over rainbows
Colors fall to earth

Posted 6 Years Ago


Einstein Noodle

6 Years Ago

ooooooooooooooo yes! over those rainbows ... love that my friend .. thanks for stopping by! :)
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Ahhhh....this takes me back into the wild...:) I was watching vultures, actually. Not as graceful as eagles, but the same principle applies.....

I was wondering whether the ending could have been a bit more dramatic.....I mean, if you or I take a banana from the table, we are "taking food", but a carnivore has to kill its prey, so there is a little bit more drama involved.....:) I watched an eagle or falcon catch a squirrel.....it's human nature to have sympathy for the "victim" but that's their cycle of life.

Great to see nature reaching our cafe of scribbles....:)

Posted 6 Years Ago


Einstein Noodle

6 Years Ago

could be i am sure...i was hoping the sharp talons would carry that ;) I use to see Eagles all the t.. read more
Reading your words... watching the video... breathing in the wonder of eagles. What an enchantment expressed through your thoughts. Sometimes the eagles come here... to Arkansas, the hills around me. And they are like the most sacred messengers. Even saw a hawk the other day dive into the field to capture her food. How your poetry becomes like their wings, lifting them higher.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Einstein Noodle

6 Years Ago

ps i am glad you enjoyed the video ... some good stuff in there for sure.
An owl on the moon

6 Years Ago

Ah, that sounds like a perfect afternoon. Yes.. was just thinking how amazing it would be to actuall.. read more
Einstein Noodle

6 Years Ago

the singing and playing poets have the hold on attention don't they ;) let me know if you get close .. read more
Thank you so very, very much for posting this wonderful video.. i'll be up there with those magnifcent creatures for quite a while, their movements are mesmerising and calming. As to the words that accompany the visions (cos that's what they are)' they teach in the gentlest and most inspiring way.

Your haiku says as much as any few words can ever do. Many thank yous, Gene.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Einstein Noodle

6 Years Ago

God bless you emma joy! so fine to have your visits always .. i feel quite gratified having touched .. read more
emmajoy

6 Years Ago

Seems you know when folk need a gentler reveille than at other times.. something uplifting ~ out of .. read more
Very interesting video. I did not know about the 'hardship' and 'rebirth' of eagles. They are certainly magnificent birds. Your haiku does them justice.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Einstein Noodle

6 Years Ago

thanks for reviewing Auntie ... your the best! :)
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Such amazing creatures. They are majestic to watch, as they swoop down into the ocean and pull out a meal to go. Can you imagine the strength of those talons? Incredible piece, Gene!

Posted 6 Years Ago


Einstein Noodle

6 Years Ago

oh yes Legs! sharp and powerful ... and they populate the world over ...i'm so glad you brought up t.. read more
I love this video I have watched it many times before and I’ve watched the bald headed eagles in Alaska the most beautiful powerful mystical being ever- sacred to the cultures up Nirth- their piercing cries warns and challenges the spirit as the fly free the king above many- one thing in life we can only be certain of is change- not always easy but best for growth and destiny- difficult paths lead to beautiful places- from pain comes beauty- wonderful words-🌹

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Einstein Noodle

6 Years Ago

yes yes yes! you capture my full intent ... i found the video after the haiku and was as stunned by .. read more
Somehow it reminded me of the power of something that is far more greater than us....the claim of it on our soul..... not sure if this makes sense.... :)

And eagles are majestic birds...
We believe the white neck eagle was the carrier for our Lord vishnu....so they are auspicious to us when we see one flying over head.... :)

Posted 6 Years Ago


Einstein Noodle

6 Years Ago

they are magnificent creatures for sure...thanks so much for sharing your thoughts on this one Ardra.. read more
Ardra

6 Years Ago

We were reviewing each other's work at same time so can't be more in sync with appreciation part...<.. read more

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Added on August 26, 2018
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