Once Again

Once Again

Hello!

That's when the troubles came.

We were both sweeping

in seperate lanes and so

lost our footings

Good morning!

That's when the bristles came

We were on the wrong tracks and so

accidents of distress pronounced us

dead and alive

Good bye!

That is something that hangs like

a billboard blocking the sunrise 

shocking the nature of things

smells like singed hair on lightning rods

sizzling the sight and the sounds of doves

E.

05/05/18

Author's Note

Reviews

[Annette Pisano-Higley]

Ohhhhh-Mega-Ouchies! Poor little pup has gotten himself too close too danger, as we do so many times in our lives. Wrong time, wrong place, just wrong..and then gone...great verse form with leading lines, flow, cleverness of language, metaphor, alliteration, imagery. Billboards blocking painful memories. Great poem E. P.S. Hope pup is rid of the barbs and feeling much better!!

[Einstein Noodle]

ahahaha you are so spot on...its a process...getting barbs removed ;) but we are a strong breed us humans right?! absolutely love your review ... i am reaffirmed in this particular writing ... love and peace Annette .. again thank you for reading with your whole self and taking time to review .. its very helpful
E.

[Annette Pisano-Higley]

You are so sweet E.! You are most welcome.:))

[sette]

i love the self reflection on this poem it can touch one's soul to its core

[Einstein Noodle]

:) ..... not my norm so very gratified you point it out and that you enjoyed ... a little self reflection can go a long ways at times eh!? :) peace and health to you my friend
E.

[sette]

peace and health to you as well my friend

[Cherrie Palmer]

"Hello, I'm Trouble." Said Fate and those good byes can't come quick enough.
Love this.

[Einstein Noodle]

glad you relate Cherrie Palmer .. so nice to have your visit! yes... if we are wise the sooner the better ;}
love and joy my friend!
E.

[Neville]

This is so blooming good, I just want to shake the hand that wrote it......your last stanza sends a shiver right through me.......Neville

[Einstein Noodle]

dear friend Neville! for you to have such a reaction puts a great big smile on me face sir ...i am so appreciative for your review .. and that you feel me man! ;)
E.

[Neville]

I do, I blooming well do my good friend........

[Einstein Noodle]

that makes us blood brothers in my books ... or i could say bloody brothers eh!?

[Neville]

either will do nicely bro.......

[Einstein Noodle]

:) ...................