Dissemination

Dissemination

truth- like

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the Waters ressurected with

 skies and clouds to color

glowing  yellow aura the sun and

rains falling

seeking the filtering of sand, limestone and charcoal

 greys.... altering .... changing

truth-morph

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springing bubbles; melting ice; and

all those words disseminating

past eons honest as fossils

palatable on the road ..hot black macadam

tar rising up and busting the sweat

pitter patterings

trace poisonings 

spreading a suffocation of confetti smalls

crying....no wailings allowed

no availing forgiveness

with all those waters in evil accord.

E. 04/05/18

Author's Note

Reviews

[Annette Pisano-Higley]

Your poem is itself a “disseminating” red sun of apocalyptic truth my friend. Exploding, imploding earth in “hot black macadame tar” fumes...brilliant imagery, brilliant language, form, flow, balance. Chronicles in fossils. Great poem with a most important warning. Kudos!

[Einstein Noodle]

oh! i need to correct my spelling don't i?! ;) macadam :))))))))) i love your sensitive reads and insightful reviews Annette ... you are like my guide stick to gauge how i have done .. so i can not thank you enough for reading and reviewing .. everyone is truly so helpful around hear .. thanks again dear friend!
E.

[Annette Pisano-Higley]

Ha! I Didn’t even notice- your poem was that good my friend! Thank you much for your words E.:)))

[Einstein Noodle]

:) .........................

[Lyn Anderson]

The mood is somewhat dreary these days. We're all feeling it. The weight of the world and the burden we place upon it exacerbated by cynical politics and doomsday scenarios ...

[Einstein Noodle]

yes! that is all of what i am saying in this one Lyn! thank you for taking time always ...great to see you here at the Cafe!! joy and fulfillment to you and yours
E.

[Onlyme]

Sadly, the end is eventually going to come to us all and this plsnet called earth one day! How truly sad this world is becoming in general!

[Einstein Noodle]

yes ... truly sad indeed ... and it seems the crap does flow down hill doesn't it ... piling up on the little people those at the top think are so ignorant ..thanks so much for reviewing Dee ... you have reminded me to appreciate our precious Earth while we have it ... peace and joy to you
E.

[Onlyme]

Hugs. Einstein

[Vic Hundahl]

Thank you for the review "The Encounter". I seem to do better with short stories. I read your poem "Disseminating". You have a way of form and knowledge of words that some day I hope to achieve. I had to read it a few times to absorb and enjoy it. well done. Vic

[Einstein Noodle]

i appreciate the time you spent to read my poem ... there are a lot of poetry that i read over and over and each time can appreciate some nuance or other ... thanks again Vic, for taking time
E.

[Dara]

I read this wonderful poem as a 'call to arms' when it comes to the environment. It is such a sad state of affairs and now we are actually witnessing the results of the neglect with the changes in weather patterns, melting glaciers etc. A very powerful, important message you have put here with your amazing style and grace.

[Einstein Noodle]

mm not the gist of what i am trying to get at; but it is in there for those who see it .. like you ;) thank you my friend... i am not an avid global warning buff at all ... our carbon imprint is small comparatively .. but i am an environmentalist that believes we are all a part of nature ..everything is part of her...even the tall buildings and concrete roads ... its the balance i think that nature and God teach us ... and i love planting trees and shrubs and have everywhere i have lived .. some of the trees are 50 ft tall now and a wondrous thing to drive by those old homes i lived in :) i love your take on this .. there is a lot that industry still needs to do to gently mold itself to the world and its wild nature ways ...on a subatomic level all things are the same substance eh!? thanks again my friend .. so glad you chose to read this one and leave your heartfelt review
E.

[Dara]

I am afraid my review may have been a bit simplistic in relation to the depth of your poem, but I am inspired by the close association you have with nature. How wonderful to make your mark adding to the landscape as you go. Your poetry reflects this also!

[Einstein Noodle]

simple state ...simply Nirvana :)))))))))))))))))))) hugs Dara ..i sure respect and appreciate our friendship here at the Cafe

[Dara]

Same goes for me. Hope you have a great weekend 🤗

[Beccy]

Garbage in, garbage out; seems more the way of the world every passing day. Plastic bags and bottles, the latest must have (and entirely pointless,) gadget, political rhetoric with no answers, the great god Google, buy one get one free, (didn't even want the first one,) it's a never ending stream that assaults and assails the senses until you want to scream 'Stop the world, I want to get off!,'

A hard hitting poem you have penned here.

Beccy.

[Einstein Noodle]

exactly it Beccy ... and so nice to see you peaking in on me pages ;))
i think there are many screams going up all over the planet ...but they are silent screams of the Spirit :( love and peace dear friend
E.

[Great Aunt Astri]

What have we done to the water? Like the water of the world which has become so polluted, so the 'water' of our minds! Let's hope this is just a wake-up call, so that the 'filtering of sand , limestone and charcoal' can clear both land and minds. This is a very cleverly descriptive and heartfelt poem.

[Einstein Noodle]

if we could liquefy our "minds" and send them through that filtering we would be so so much more healthy, happy and get some clarity :( but we do have other means don't we?! love love love to ya Auntie ... still a wonderful treat to have your reviews

[Great Aunt Astri]

You are surely welcome, Mr Einstein.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

it's april...it's the rains of spring...and then the warming, the drying out, much like we do in life...the rains pour on us, we get pain and heartbreak but a spring comes...and we come back to life...we grow stronger toward that sun that lights our heart.

[Einstein Noodle]

what a fine and positive outlook my friend...thank you for reading and sharing your thoughts on it ... the sun here will be showing in an hour or two ..i will be sure to thank him for that warmth sir! ;)
E.

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Gene... I walked on the Bay of Funday in Nova Scotia Canada in 1970. The fossils were awesome. Your poetry reflects the earth with change over time as it evolves. The magnificent treasures are part of our being here. truly, Pat

[Patricia Wedel]

Correction of spelling... Bay of Fundy in Nova Scotia Canada 🇨🇦 known for highest tides...

[Einstein Noodle]

Pat! don't know how i missed your review...thank you so much! i will look up the Bay of Fundy ... i was beginning my "journey home" in 70 ;) from places all over the place .. but never been to Fundy :) glad you picked up on the "fossils" ..they are very cool indeed
E.

[Patricia Wedel]

dear E... and now I hear we will have another Eclipse... according to prophecy...
I do choose to try and Save our planet and all the precious babies and children and people of all ages... Anen

[Patricia Wedel]

dear E... I am not forgetting the beauty of nature and wildlife.... all the gorgeous giraffes and so forth... truly, Pat

[Einstein Noodle]

its a boat-full to remember isn't it?! i believe that when we entertain healthy thoughts ..it is the same as praying ... i think many many people thirst for truth and less garbage left around to destroy things ... love and peace dear friend

[Patricia Wedel]

dear E... Good will win over evil... it will be an enlightening... Amen

[barleygirl]

Altho your music & artwork choices lead some of us to think about all that junk swirling around in our big Pacific Garbage Patch (well-publicized curse going on for years) . . . I tend to be in "overload" mode lately, thinking of our public discourse as being a similar swirl of never-ending junk colliding & disseminating in a way where the junk heaps tend to line up in stark divisions. Your vivid imagery is expressed with fresh imagination, which could apply to either case! (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

[Einstein Noodle]

hi Ms. Barley! spot on observations says i! can be taken either way for sure...and perhaps several more as well...the beauty of words eh!? i feel that same overload dahlink! :( but did "fee;" a little lighter having written and shared this one ;) thank you for reviewing dear friend
E.

[Papaya]

evolution has always been a good thing in my opinion but here we are now in a world where we are evolving in the wrong way. like undoing progress.

[Einstein Noodle]

perhaps my friend ...the universe continues to change and humans do seem to loose sight of the truth of things ... if the truth that lights our way is darkness ... how very deep that darkness eh!? (from the Bible) we can undo all the goodness in an instant ... sometimes unable to repair :( love your visits always my friend ... and thank you for taking time to review! :)
E.