Spring Me

baby blue softly folded into 

cotton  clouds

bourbon drenched 

sugar cubes torched by

body warmed winds 

would you come with me?

buds of promise firm

supple stems move as

spring waters over

rocks jagged 

translucent film

suspends us

join me

dancing flitting flirting fireflies

cheeky kisses of faeries

thousands of them raspberry buzzings

flushed with hungry root

everything we need, 

everything we want is

down below.

we break the rocks, 

bind the spells, 

take the gems

growing together you and i

entwining vines 

reaching.

3/23/2018

E.

Author's Note

Reviews

[Annette Pisano-Higley]

Love it, love it, love it E.! “Spring Me” too- right now! Delightfully spring-y, lyrical, vital, sensuous and alogether ‘ ‘happy-fying’ poem...eloquent language and colorfully fresh imagery jumps off the page and double- entendres tickle the senses. “Entwining vines..reaching”- ahhhh yes... Splendid write.

[Einstein Noodle]

oh my dear Annette! i am so happy for your review..it is what i had shot for ..so glad you picked up on the sensuality ... i am shy and was not certain it would come through .. i am happy as a lark my friend .. thanks to your visit and taking time to comment ... :)))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))
E.

[Kelly Scheppers]

You sure know how to woo a girl right out of her shoes! My, my, now I know how butter feels when it hits the toast! ...from the dancing of "flitting flirting fireflies", I knew this was going to find a place in my heart.

...and it did! x

[Einstein Noodle]

oh Legs!!!!!! can i have your number???? ;) i'm pretty happy you enjoyed my poem ...i am lifted up with joy my friend .... i feel so very gratified ..its a bit different from my norm ... but if Spring doesn't burst into song .. it may burst at the seams right :)) truly grateful for your visit and review Kelly!
love and peace
E.

[barleygirl]

Definitely one of the best of yours I've read so far! This is brilliant & lofty & crammed with awesome imagery. The bouncy eagerness that's coming across in waves makes this an irresistible invite. I've had the writing "blahs" lately & this inspires me to shake off the lethargy & try to do something with a little buoyancy myself someday soon. I've honestly never read a springtime poem that conveys more of a contagious anticipation. This afternoon our springtime starts with 80* days for the next week or so. Please let's have no more almost-frosty mornings that require a fire in the woodstove! I'm tired of having black knuckles (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

[Einstein Noodle]

you are the homesteader aren't you!? ;) thing about those black knuckles is the scent of wood smoke and warmth that passes understanding ;) i am very happy this poem lifted your spirit Barleygirl ... could not ask for better or more ... love love love to ya! :) and thank you so much for taking time
E.

[J. J. Nightingale]

Did enjoy.... I'll jump alongside you, to catch those cotton balls in baby blues....
Such gifts those rocks and growing greens, and sounds of bubbling chatting to over joying beings...

Spring..there is a chance at love and Life, once more..

Loving this !!!

Jazzy

[Einstein Noodle]

oh thanks so much for your review..so completely gave me a joyous smile ..what its all about Jazzy .. so happy you jumped in ;))))))))))))))) love and peace!
E.

[J. J. Nightingale]

Love and Peace..and JOY to you... You are welcome...

[Cryingkate]

I'll go with you, I'll entwine with you from the Breaking rock reaching to the Baby blue folds, Oh yes the raspberry buzzing sounds do call. ready?..... Get set....... Let's go.....

[Einstein Noodle]

yaaaaaaaaaaahooooooooooooooooooo! ;) thanks Kate...really glad you read this one now that you are back and spending some time ..love ya!
E.

[Cryingkate]

:-) I'm glad too !

[Ardra]

E. Seems to be under the spell of spring... ;)
Lovely poem...
:)

[Einstein Noodle]

:) Spring can do that eh!? ;) thanks for the visit Galadriel! always appreciate the time you take here :)
E.

[θεά]

I like the way you've placed adjectives with nouns, lending it a soft mystery to what's about to unfold in the next line. The result is a delectable combination of hedonism with romance, with nature and passion. Beautiful execution.

[Einstein Noodle]

thank you so much for reading and reviewing Mallika! so happy for your review as it is what i was "reaching" for ;) love and joy my friend
E.