Spring Me

baby blue softly folded into 

cotton  clouds

bourbon drenched 

sugar cubes torched by

body warmed winds 

would you come with me?

buds of promise firm

supple stems move as

spring waters over

rocks jagged 

translucent film

suspends us

join me

dancing flitting flirting fireflies

cheeky kisses of faeries

thousands of them raspberry buzzings

flushed with hungry root

everything we need, 

everything we want is

down below.

we break the rocks, 

bind the spells, 

take the gems

growing together you and i

entwining vines 

reaching.

3/23/2018

E.

Author's Note

Reviews

[Annette Pisano-Higley]

Love it, love it, love it E.! “Spring Me” too- right now! Delightfully spring-y, lyrical, vital, sensuous and alogether ‘ ‘happy-fying’ poem...eloquent language and colorfully fresh imagery jumps off the page and double- entendres tickle the senses. “Entwining vines..reaching”- ahhhh yes... Splendid write.

[Einstein Noodle]

oh my dear Annette! i am so happy for your review..it is what i had shot for ..so glad you picked up on the sensuality ... i am shy and was not certain it would come through .. i am happy as a lark my friend .. thanks to your visit and taking time to comment ... :)))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))
E.

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Gene... has it really been two years since
you penned this most romantic poem... a Rendezvous
skipping across the Rocks of aphrodisiacs kiss of
Spring buds. gently, Pat

[Einstein Noodle]

three years Pat! what a treat that you found this .. and brought me back to it .. thank you for taking time .. Spring is coming .. oh the joy indeed ... did you listen to the Jazz?
E.

[Dhara_Ditzy Kat]

A poem on passion, so indirect, yet so direct. Hidden passion in magical words, galores of it. Spell bound, I read the unfolding of the ultimate connection. Blissful, soft, tender yet very sensual. Love should be like this. Unhurried, as a cool and calm spring, tempering jagged rocks, breaking them, flooding gently the soul. Kudos E!

[Einstein Noodle]

so so happy you found and enjoyed this one...it is one of my personal favorites (if we are allowed to have one) ;)) your words are everything i hope to convey ... thank you for your sensitive and experiential review .. i am so encouraged ma'am
E.

[Dhara_Ditzy Kat]

Ohhh...no Maa'm...just your friend E.
It was such a pleasure reading this poem, all the way ;)

[Einstein Noodle]

;) .................

[Fran Marie]

An ethereal feeling of light and joy emits from this lovely piece of poetry..one feels the abundance of love within each poetic verse so well written and expressed..
Nice Work ..

[Einstein Noodle]

thanks Fran with the sun upon her face ;) you make me smile ear to ear
E.

[sette]

there is no denying that love is really something potent and powerful emotion.. smooth flow of words.. i like the expressive words..directly connecting to the heart including the throbbing and beating of it my friend

[Einstein Noodle]

thanks sette! i appreciate your review ... coming back to this one i experience the joy i felt in writing it ..God bless!
E.

[Einstein Noodle]

ps. thank you for pointing out specifically things you like ..that helps a lot as i want to improve ..as we all do ;)

[sette]

you are welcome my dear friend

[Island Hippy]

Life living, life giving words. Aloha!
A color and effortless vibrancy to your words my friend - love this energy. Magic writing x

[Einstein Noodle]

ahahahah and i am so happy you read this one...i think it fits your spirit well ... Aloha to you! i can see you leaping across the beaches ..island to island ;)
E.

[Cherrie Palmer]

A bourbon drenched cotton cloud, now all we need is a bit of rain and a barrel:) this is a smooth and jazzy poem I can see life renewed.

[Einstein Noodle]

ahahaha yes ..rain and a barrel please!! your review makes me smile for sure Cherrie! thanks so much for taking time..glad you enjoyed
E.

[Elizabeth]

The imagery in this poem is delightful and the theme of the poem is so well done... I feel like reading this again and again... The writing is so eloquent and the overall tone of the poem is very refreshing

[Einstein Noodle]

oh you made my day Mist! to know people want to read again is very gratifying ... thanks so much for saying so ... peace and health
E.

[Elizabeth]

You're welcome :)

[Lyn Anderson]

Spring me - makes me think of escaping, together, growing, learning. Un uplifting and romantic poem

[Einstein Noodle]

it gives me a smile to know this affected you in that way ..its what i was shooting for and you reviewing it has brought me back to the moments that inspired it ..thanks so much Lyn ...best of the day to ya
E.

[Onlyme]

Euphoric feelings felt by two souls. Entwined as one. Captured in a sheer delightful poem.

[Einstein Noodle]

glad you found this one to review Dee ... it is one of my personal favorites if we allowed such things ;) couldn't feel more gratified that those feelings came through for you ..much appreciated Dee!
E.

[Moonie]

Love this poem, E. You've sprung a great pun at us... ;)
I like how you first describe the physical changes that the season brings all around us- from perfectly shaped cotton-candy clouds, to the warmer winds, then to the supple new buds and stems; and then move onto the changes in our moods that we associate with spring generally. This is an absolutely gorgeous piece, E.
The entire first stanza flows off my tongue, as smoothly as fresh triple-berry slushies on warm springy days.

[Einstein Noodle]

oh Moon's Fairest ..i am so happy this affected you so..and that you happened to choose it to read ...thank you so much...always for you support ...peace and joy