Heart of Mind

captcha always is one step ahead it seems .. this one was "uptwined" .. i am not lying!

Heart of Mind

drinking eyes

                  pink tongue

                                  drips 

wet

healthy heart is

                         beating yet ;)

E.

11/26/16

Author's Note

Reviews

[Lydia Shutter]

Maybe I am way off base here, but I picture a man and a woman at a bar drinking together and then scurrying off to somewhere private for some sensual activity. In any case, I like the indentations and where I traveled while reading. Thanks, E. Lydi**

[Einstein Noodle]

my my! where is your head at Lydia?? ;))) i love the details of your impressions .. thank you so much for reading and reviewing .. peace and joy my friend!
E.

[Lydia Shutter]

I guess I will be on Santa's naughty list! LOL

[Einstein Noodle]

ahahaha you gave me a fine out loud chuckle just ow ..naughty girl you! ;)

[Einstein Noodle]

that's "just now" ;)

[Lydia Shutter]

Good, laughter is good for the soul! :)

[Einstein Noodle]

yes it is my dear friend! it surely is ..love and peace and joy in the mornin' to ya!

[Lydia Shutter]

Have a great day! ❤️️💙💜

[Cryingkate]

I see this as.. " Someone saying As I think Young I am Young." Age is only a state of mind. Very concise. :-)

[Einstein Noodle]

i think that is true ... therefore .... ???? ;) really happy that you stopped by Cry Baby .. i hope those loose ends tie and you are able to make regular visits to this WC ...
E.

[Shabeeh Haider]

Very captivating lines. Few words but deep and profound in meaning.

[Einstein Noodle]

nice to meet you Shabeeh .. glad you enjoyed the read .. i appreciate you taking time here and will certainly pay a visit to your place :)
E.

[Shabeeh Haider]

Nice to meet you.... and a pleasure to have read you.

[James]

I can't seem to stop reading it. I love the ending..and the beginning. It's just a wonderful little poem.

[Einstein Noodle]

ahahaha i am so gratified by your remarks my friend! ...thank you! glad it had such an effect on you :)
E.

[Cyprian Van Dyke]

Love this. Few words, but great imagery, rhymes and story, making everything animate in the readers mind! Tyfs!

[Einstein Noodle]

"It's all in the mind" one anthem from the 60's sure rang true didn't it?! thanks for taking time to read and review my friend .. much appreciated!
E.
ps i am comp. illiterate..what is Tyfs?

[Cyprian Van Dyke]

Tyfs - Thank you for sharing.
Yea, it did ring true. :)
You're most welcome, it's my pleasure!

[Einstein Noodle]

ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh thank you!

[Cyprian Van Dyke]

You're very welcome

[Valentine]

Short but to the point, I can't say just what it brought to my mind. Valentine

[Einstein Noodle]

ahahahah Dear Valentine .. love your review .. your the best! :)
E.

[TL Boehm]

Like this succinct snippet of poetry - not sure why it reminds me of a cat but I get this mental image...I'm a weirdo

[Einstein Noodle]

hi TL! i think a cat fits perfectly ... thanks for the smile across my face right now .. and thank you for reviewing to let me know your thoughts .. always appreciated!
E.