Heart of Mind

captcha always is one step ahead it seems .. this one was "uptwined" .. i am not lying!

Heart of Mind

drinking eyes

                  pink tongue

                                  drips 

wet

healthy heart is

                         beating yet ;)

E.

11/26/16

Author's Note

Reviews

[Lydia Shutter]

Maybe I am way off base here, but I picture a man and a woman at a bar drinking together and then scurrying off to somewhere private for some sensual activity. In any case, I like the indentations and where I traveled while reading. Thanks, E. Lydi**

[Einstein Noodle]

my my! where is your head at Lydia?? ;))) i love the details of your impressions .. thank you so much for reading and reviewing .. peace and joy my friend!
E.

[Lydia Shutter]

I guess I will be on Santa's naughty list! LOL

[Einstein Noodle]

ahahaha you gave me a fine out loud chuckle just ow ..naughty girl you! ;)

[Einstein Noodle]

that's "just now" ;)

[Lydia Shutter]

Good, laughter is good for the soul! :)

[Einstein Noodle]

yes it is my dear friend! it surely is ..love and peace and joy in the mornin' to ya!

[Lydia Shutter]

Have a great day! ❤️️💙💜

[sedulous_mind]

Very short but good poem! Makes me think about various ways to interprete your words. You really leave it open to ones imagination. I am confused and amazed at the same time.

[Einstein Noodle]

i think you are right .. this one is very open ended and absolutely in need of the stories anyone may find in it beyond the words .. thanks so much for taking time my new found friend .. right here at the Cafe'
E.

[sedulous_mind]

Oh thank you for your kind words.
Take care -S

[Great Aunt Astri]

Is Lydia right???... A love poem, Einstein? Perhaps I need to keep searching, although I very much liked this one.

[Einstein Noodle]

ahahaha meant to be sensual no doubt ..always love baby! .. i sent you a link on your poem Buried Love ..truth be told ..i was also having a little fun with my age thing in this one ;)
E.

[Jimmy Yetts]

Heart of mind is thinking, yet--bringing health to the entire body.
All I got, E.

[Einstein Noodle]

there is a connection ...would you agree!? ya got it all my friend! :)
E.

[Ken Simm.]

Perhaps its the visual artist in me but I see this as a photograph or possibly following on from Lydi's comment, The Nighthawks by Edward Hopper. In any case it is remarkably evocative.

[Einstein Noodle]

well sir...you are a painter as well as poet!! what a fantastic thing to say sir ..thank you so much! that dinner is every common persons dinner and corner ..if you grew up on any "streets" ..you hung out there ..sometimes with friends ..and sometimes in lonely solitude ...kind of like the cafe eh!? ;) your comments are important ..Lydia's review gave me a smile ... this is a pretty bare bones poem (no pun) ... ones imagination goes a long way :) thanks again for stopping by!
E.

[Benita-Staebell M - Kin..]

Nicely penned short and sweet
Prince is a favorite of mine. Take care friend

[Einstein Noodle]

thanks Benita! Prince was a true artist in many ways and is missed by many i am sure .. i appreciate you taking time
E.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i'm just wondering if there should be or needs to be a second drink.....or...oh the hell with it...let's get out of here...and...

so much suggested in this short piece that has such flare.

j.

[Einstein Noodle]

ahahahaha .. i say drink but don't let the well run dry :))) it's all in the mind isn't it jacob!? your review gave me a fine smile as i leave the cafe for the day .... the top o' the mahrnin' to ya sir!
E.

[Neville]

What an absolutely smashing write we have here. More cerebral than one might first think. I could certainly read it over & over & almost certainly will. Cheers........N

[Einstein Noodle]

hallelujah! hot damn! ...what a rousing of my heart and soul you have given me .. Neville .. one could not hope for more .. thank you from the bottom of my heart .. er ... mind .. er .. i think? :))
E.

[Neville]

My problem entirely, oops I mean pleasure....N

[Sami Khalil]

Soften your heart to the lovely ones and open your mind to possibilities...lol
Love first and think later about the consequences...An amazing write with powerful connotations...:).....................

[Einstein Noodle]

ahahaha! thank you for taking time ..love your comments ...you put a big smile on my face Sami ..read moreahahaha! thank you for taking time ..love your comments ...you put a big smile on my face Sami ..
E.

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)......................

[Butch Decatoria]

Maybe mind of your heart... Nice one.

[Einstein Noodle]

ahahah yep ..could go either way couldn't it!? the two camps of which comes first ..thoughts or feelings has been unresolved for many years ..i personally think the thoughts are the trigger ;)thanks for stopping Butch ... by the way .. i don't think i have ever told you how much joy i get from your red nose avatar ..every time i see it :)
E.

[barleygirl]

After reading Lydia's review, which reflects her often sensual point of view in her many lovely poems, I feel a bit sheepish (or maybe doggish) to admit that I was picturing a wagging pink tongue dripping water across my kitchen floor after a big session of noisy gulping! *wink! wink!* What a wide spectrum of imagery your words evoke! (((HUGS)))

[Einstein Noodle]

ahahahaha such a hardy laugh you give me ..yes ..we are all to familiar with lapping dogs .. Bella has such thick tenacious spit it usually has a half hour hang time ;) thanks for taking time barley .. love your impressions
E.

[barleygirl]

Your Bella comment made me laugh a big hearty belly laugh! *wink! wink!* (((HUGS)))

[Einstein Noodle]

:) ...................