The Racist

The Racist

A Poem by Einstein Noodle

The Racist
Born blind as 
        far
 
               as eye can see
You're all different.
            Just.
                       Like.
 Me.
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© 2016 Einstein Noodle


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funny how we see little kids playing together...all of them, not a care in the world and not a prejudiced bone in their bodies...then they grow up and learn it---from those who came before...we seem to have come so far since the 60's in some ways and yet not far at all...still the same old thought process...and your poem speaks to that concept...we are all different, especially those who have phobias against the others who are. I see the "born blind" more as born blind of the differences and then the eye sight and heart sight improves...in a bad way...and then we see the differences and focus too much on them...in a negative way...

j.

Posted 8 Years Ago


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Einstein Noodle

8 Years Ago

thank you for your insightful reading of this one jacob ..spot on! i can relate to your inferences a.. read more



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This is just me talking, ok? I personally would change the format from being so abstract, to something more focused. But hey, if you're satisfied with it, then that's ALL that really matters!

Change the word "your" to "you're" ...then sit back and smile! It certainly speaks volumes!

Posted 8 Years Ago


Einstein Noodle

8 Years Ago

oops ..good eye Kelly .. thanks!! correcting that right away .. i did have it a little more compact .. read more
Beautifully thought out...division is the bane of our times...sadly...poignant message :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


Einstein Noodle

8 Years Ago

it is Poppy ... and our politicians are working so hard to make it even more divisive ... for their .. read more
Ruth

8 Years Ago

Most welcome E x
WE are all different but the same under the skin. When I lost my baby I had to have blood transfusions on and off for a year. I imagine I have a little bit of everyone in me. Valentine

Posted 8 Years Ago


Einstein Noodle

8 Years Ago

i am sorry for your loss Valentine ..you have swum the river and been over the mountain as the old c.. read more
do you think the form fits the discord ..and the irony?

Posted 8 Years Ago


emmajoy

8 Years Ago

Whatever you write seems to come from wide-open eyes and all seeing heart, dear you.

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Einstein Noodle

8 Years Ago

emma! you are too kind .. thank you so much! love and peace my friend!
E.

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