SOMETIMES

SOMETIMES

Sometimes I am cold

Like a  winter lake

 

Sometimes I am confused

Like a misty morning

 

Sometimes I am quiet

Like a moonless desert

 

Sometimes I am dry

Like an artificial flower

 

Sometimes I am sad

Like autumn leaves

 

Sometimes I am heavy

Like a flooded river

 

Sometimes I am light

Like falling snowflakes

 

Sometimes I am lost

Like a lonely cloud

 

And sometimes

I  don’t know me……..

Reviews

[rivers]

I love the simple complexity of the way you used nature metaphors. Nicely done and very relatable to an ever evolving thinkers journey…

sometimes you can wait a lifetime and never be sure … sometimes we are our imagination coming to life… and sometimes we are as blind as we want to be ... Thanks for igniting the flame of thought.

[WILDERNESS]

I couldn't agree with you more..........................thanks for the review

[Angelic Surrender]

So true. I can relate to this completely. You did a great job describing this. I love it :)

[~ Twilight~]

Not a believer inside the mosque, am I
Nor a pagan disciple of false rites
Not the pure amongst the impure
Neither Moses, nor the Pharaoh
Bulleh! to me, I am not known

nobody knows himself,we just live the illusion of knowing...

[rosemary keogh]

aww this is lovely. sad but beautifully expressed.

[WILDERNESS]

SOMETIMES I DON'T KNOW THE REAL ME.................