PATH

Life has many paths, you choose you decide.........

PATH

The path I treaded

was not a path I needed

to salvage a broken soul

or to meet desired goal

the life that transpired

was not that inspired

any who came close

any whom I choose

the songs that were sung

made no meaning among

the audience that came

or left without a claim

poems that were written

only got smitten

for their lack of purpose

in meaning and in words

Reviews

[Great Aunt Astri]

Too true for many of us. Although I think it is only a small percentage of people who truly follow their heart. Too many obstacles and demands! Very good poem.

[WILDERNESS]

Thankyou so much for caring to read and review..

[s y e]

Hmmmm.... what path will I go down, I wonder... I think I might be going down the food root, ha! ;-) Jokes, that was lame but oh well. I loved this one, very thought-provoking, indeed.

[WILDERNESS]

Thanks a lot ............... follow your heart, :)

[Anita Singh]

Yet another amazing write! Very thought provoking. Makes one wonder...

[WILDERNESS]

Thanks a lot Annabella.................... glad you liked

[Rose of many colours]

Thanks for sharing this piece. You have placed a lot of deep feelings into this piece, though the words are simple.

[WILDERNESS]

Yes, thanks a bunch dear...............

[Baby Ricochet]

Good self reflective piece my friend. Good flow

[WILDERNESS]

Thanks a lot ......................