A Life of Lust

Alas, the man lost his kith and kin

Cared for hoots, indulged all kinds of sin.

Only wanted praise for his renditions

For the man was given to a life of Ambitions.

 

Slowly he made a mess of his very own self

Nothing could quench his thirst, ate like an elf.

Only money mattered, no cast, colour or creed

For the man was given to a life of Greed.

 

At last, he had none to love none to care

Selfish ways led him into this snare.

No one to share or stoke a tender fire

For the man was given to a life of Desire.

 

Eventually the man gave up his soul

Gave up light, embraced the ghoul.

All his possessions, turned ash and dust,

For the man was given to a life of Lust.

Author's Note

Lust, Desire, Ambition and Greed can all lead to destruction.

Reviews

[Rose of many colours]

Yes It always does. This poem hit the nail on the head..this is a wake up call for some of us.

[Azure Montessa (Blue)]

Cleverly written and the rhymes are well-thought! I'm joyous that you wrote this. Such a big slap on my face, a slap of waking up. Keep inspiring! :x

[Phantom Heart]

Loved it. I like the stanza's the rhyme, the topic, the writing. :)

[WILDERNESS]

Thanks a bundle dear, for the review and comments ,

[Phantom Heart]

You're quite welcome. I enjoy reading your writing.

[SyberRose]

Nicely penned and so true...money is the root of all evil they say...Enjoyed the theme...Rose:)