The Phantom Of Pain

The Phantom Of Pain

A Poem by Ezekiel Silver
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Year poem was written: 2012

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                  The phantom of pain feels remorse. 
                  The phantom of pain feels despair. 
                  The phantom of pain feels sorrow. 
                  The phantom of pain feels misery. 
                  The phantom of pain feels grief. 
                  The phantom of pain feels grief. 

© 2012 Ezekiel Silver


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I like it. Maybe you can change up your style of writing but still overall a great poem.

Posted 12 Years Ago
Phantoms feel all those things; especially, I suppose, grief.

Posted 12 Years Ago
like how you put emphasis on the last line, thats the first thing you notice on the page

Posted 12 Years Ago

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Ezekiel Silver
Ezekiel Silver

Nampa , ID



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I'm just a lonely young man who's recently graduated high school hoping to make a difference in people's lives with my work. Also, Ezekiel Silver is not my real name but one of two pen names I made. more..

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