The Wind is Like A Drifter

Year poem was written: 2011

                  The wind travels like a drifter.

                  The wind sees like a drifter.

                  The wind comes like a drifter.

                  The wind goes like a drifter.

                  The wind is like a drifter.

                  The wind is like a drifter.

Reviews

[asdarkeyesclose]

i start to see a pattern to your poetry. i like the repetition of the last line- it gives it more impact somehow. the form has a lot of strengths to it and i like that you use similies and metaphors- these are the building blocks of good poetry :)