I ____ ___

A poem about someone that affected my life quite deeply.

I remeber the day I found you

 letting my self, with all my esteem turn to talk to you

 opening my eyes as I found that I grew, and loved you

  venturing to a new world with someone who, I thought I'd grow old to 

  eventually, you made a sudden change 

     

  you left my world, 

  out of place really I felt 

  unusual to me, still this day.

,

many days passed, turing to weeks 

experiencing how long years turn me weak

  time still stops, sitting so still for so long. 

only if I could quit my addiction for you. 

.

only hoping you’ll tell me again that

you love me to.. 

Reviews

[Bala Gorthi]

My first read of your work......
It makes one terribly sad when we read painful things. But life goes on.
A beautiful write. I wonder if it should 'thought' in place of though (second section third line).
I liked the way you brought out the pain in your poem.
Thanks for sharing. Keep writing :-):-)

[Eyvindur]

Thanks for the edit ! Totally didn't see it.

[Eyvindur]

Also your kind words :)

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very sad and very beautiful. words simply reach lost and long.

[Eyvindur]

thank you so much :)