The Art of Subconscious Illusions

this is me and what i can do in the dream realm, please read, you'll be surprised.....

 

 

 

 

 

I‘m in your head as you lay in bed

But you don’t know I’m there

Then when you sleep without a peep

I show up with my mind to share

 

I smell your fear and then appear

But will I make it go way?

I’m in your dreams and nightmare schemes

Which side am I on would you say?

 

Yes hello there

I can see you

Don’t tell me your thoughts

There’s no need too

I can protect you from those things

The creatures there and the sirens that sing

Your nightmares just look at me

And say “ we better watch it, he may be real you see”

 

Then your dreams may seem so pleasant

But I drop in with a little present

That field of flowers seems ungray

Don’t worry, I’ll help the sunshine stay

 

Though as much as you want me

I’m not really there

Only a figment of your imagination

Doesn’t seem so fair?

 

I come and go through your open mind

Just wait for me, its hard not to see

I’m noticed quick

Your minds first quick

 

I’ll sit there in my meditation

As you think it’s because of your medication

But no it’s me in my metal strength

Just try and make me go away

Though I may look asleep

Actually my thoughts still seep

It’s all to fool any who watch

I’m awake and deep in thought

 

I love it when I’m in invasion

Leaving only mental abrasions

You know I’m there by shadowed eyes

Chills run in cold sweat as you try to hide

 

They seem like just illusions

In your best and only conclusion

Sorry for the blatant intrusion

It’s really all for my own amusion

 

So go to sleep and dream away

I’ll be there soon to come and play

No matter if its night or day

I see your dreams and cannot stray

 

In the path of destruction

I’m the thing to be an obstruction

Though I may not really be there

You feel and know my stare

I am that shadow in the night

Or the pilot to that flight

I’m the animal you see hiding

Your next move is what you should be deciding

 

Though I do not plan to harm

It doesn’t mean I’m not able to

The thing to save you would be your alarm

The marks and scars will be freshly new

 

Leave me be and I wont try

Anything too horribly shy

I would love you to invite me in

Don’t worry honey, it’s not a sin

 

I would love to come with you

Just have fun, just us two

So many things I could create

Something more towards a happy fate

 

Paint a picture in your head

Either happiness or sinking dread

I can make anything appear

But no matter what the illusions sincere

It’s called an art because it really is

With so many pieces to perfect

Too much to learn and control

All complicated special effects

Something I learned how to do

My brush is my mind and canvas is you

 

Mysterium, delirium, or any type of chi

No one hears you cry, or hears any plea

I’ll just stick around, able to be found

Come and talk if you may

 

So in pleasant dreams and nightmare schemes

I’m not picky today

You want to see? Then follow me

Return again I may…..

 

The Art of

Subconscious Illusions

Reviews

[angelina neves]

You are dangerous!! :)
well, i could interpreted in 2 ways:
- the first one was that you are talking to some other person and you "violate" the dreams of that person (and that, even if it is with good intentions, is not respectfull of the other person!)
or (and i like this one better!! And it happens all the time...)
- some part of you or some "obsession" of yours is talking to you... and this is told in a with strong images.
Any way, it was nice to read!

[Ari]

Some grammatical/spelling issues (watch your it's and its, as well as your too/to's). Amusion is not a word. Also, your rhyme seems forced in a few places.

I like the overall theme of this, and the overwhelming sense of confidence and power that comes through.

[Eyudo]

wow, that font looks better than i thought, it matches it well ^_^