can you add to

can you add to

A Poem by Eyudo
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well, can you?

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Can You Add To…

 

 

Beauty that signifies the start of a wonder

So much, my minds in a dunder

The one thing I ask myself

Can you add to beauty itself?

 

 

A rose, so simple it is

To me, shows how true love tis

It’s form so divine

I really do see it as a sign

 

 

Something so pleasure

As loving another

It’s completely unregretable

It makes your heart hover

 

 

We can give another that special satisfaction

Through something so simple as a caring action

For if I were to try and make love any greater

Too much responsibility would come forth later

 

 

Joyous days and precious moments

Come to my eye’s in the years I’ve spent

Better than words are able to say

It makes bad feelings flutter away

 

 

Can you add to passion?

And the sensual ness of thy self?

Can we all imagine that the feelings on the shelf

Could turn out so deep and strong in reaction

To the thing we call love

it being impossible to stop

© 2008 Eyudo


Author's Note

Eyudo
honestly, an experiment that failed in disaster, the rymes are definatley most forced in it >_<

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Eyudo
Eyudo

Painesville, the city of pain....., OH



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