You

this shows true emotion of love, especially when it goes wrong.....

You

Daggers stab you
Knives the same
Eyes do too
Their all about pain

Your words do pierce
I only apologized
You acted so fierce
I hope you realized

I said my sorries
And I said my goodbyes
So many stories
Doesn’t it make you want to cry?

It’s ridiculous how the world is kept
Posers and backstabbers came
I never should have slept

Your words are harsh
And see no truth
Fate is not set
Can’t you forgive? Can’t you forget?

I see you feel the need to cast away
But in my life I will stay
You can tell me all you want to say
But I see it, your dead to me today

All I went through
Just for you
Things I did so
To see you too

Then you come and say things you can’t?
You have no right to say “it won’t do it”!
You’ve done worse than that!

I admitted my faults
Yet you still lie
Is it because you better? Is it because you shy?
Why not admit all of the times!
 

I did my best and all the rest
Try to find someone caring like me
Not to brag, but they will tell you it’s rare you see
Solitude is no such thing
 

Happiness is all I bring
Betray me and I won’t fall to my knees
I won’t plea. It’s not worth it to me.

Stale faith in the human race
All gone because they do the stuff we know not
We can’t just live one, there always has to be a problem
Even if we have to create it!
You created this! We created this!
Not just me…………….

So many thins unsaid
So many things undone
So many things to think
Are any of them true?

I think my silent thoughts
And stare at you
You know I'm there, but ignore
Because it only makes proof

I can see it in you
You look away to hide the pain
Leaving someone by a confusion
Not sure what to do

I say my words I mean
Now we have no wall to which against to lean.
I will be laurite some day
But will you

Live your life, Think your right
Go away when you want to stay
Wonder why and secretly cry
Right now, we know your wondering why.

I say these things as truth
So many things I want to say
But I don’t think you’d listen
So be a non believer, but never forget
I am here and you are somewhere………………….

Reviews

[TLK]

It's "they're all about pain". And what's a "laurite"? I assume you mean "laureate"...

[TLK]

I note that you link to some kind of online store to sell your writing, but it is empty (and I assume has been that way for five years). This is probably for the best if you don't wish to edit and improve your own writing in such basic ways.