The Waiting Game

The Waiting Game

A Poem by LoudMind
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An old piece i wrote out of love and pain.

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The clock is ticking, and I’m still waiting
Looking at my phone, waiting for your call
Why do i always wait?
Though i know there is someone else
Why do i still hope?
Still waiting for your hi’s and hello’s
Waiting in vain, waiting in pain
Can i survive in this waiting game?

© 2025 LoudMind


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yearning for love, clinging to what ifs this feeling is very haunting. This is a very good poem thank you for sharing.


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LoudMind

1 Month Ago

thank you for taking the time to read this.

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Added on February 28, 2025
Last Updated on February 28, 2025
Tags: Love, poetry, hope, life

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LoudMind
LoudMind

Greenwich , CT



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Hi. I used to write journals and poems when i was a kid. I write my own piece and record it on my phone with a background music. I didn’t know what i was doing back then but it made me feel good.. more..

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