to the falling of the walls

I don't remember why I wrote this

to the falling of the walls

from the right to the left

 

to the falling of the walls

from the front to behind

 

to the falling of the walls

and the crumbling ceiling

 

to the falling of the walls

from the old to the new

 

to the falling of the walls

to the bright light beyond them

 

to the falling of the walls

and the nice green grass after

 

to the falling of the walls

and freedom from the norm

 

to the falling of the walls

and to never being closed in

 

to the falling of the walls

this is a new life

Author's Note

please comment good or bad i want them!

Reviews

[Rylie]

I love this poem. It is so simple yet it conveys so much emotion in such simple words. Good write! Keep it up.

[Comatose]

Wow, this poem is simple, yet the emotion is still strongly felt. Very well done.