Alone

Everyone has a limit
Sometimes it only takes a minute
To reach the peak
Everything seems so bleak
They can't hide it anymore
They never know what's in store
They have something to share
But then again no one cares...

Reviews

[Michael Phillips]

That 2nd line is kind of too long to fit the flow but other than that its fine at best

[Kasey Miriam]

Another set me a requst to read your work and I am glad they did! This poem is lovely and its a feeling that everyone gets. whether it be constan and something they live with or just for a moment when people turn their backs. Thank you for sharing and I look forward to reading more

[Jennie Baron]

A feeling I've definitely known. We are all ultimately alone, we have an inner life that no one else can know, and you state that very well.