I Will See You Again

I Will See You Again

A Story by EvErEyEs
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Coming back to a childhood love.

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We met in a childhood memory
Our paths parted when the big city I left
Together we swore never to forget
In your eyes I gazed
Hugged you tight as I silently wept 
To your ear my tears whispered
"I will see you again"
Years passed, we were getting older
Everyday we talked for hours
I heard you cry, I knew your pains, your life I knew better than my own
Friends we were, lovers we turned
We were closer than ever
"I will see you again"
I call one night, not but two words I said
"Come outside"
There you were eight years later
A boy I left, a man I found
You held me in your arms
I had never felt more alive
Our promise to never forget we had kept
Our lives as one again
This time we swore "Together We Wed"
"I did see you again"

© 2012 EvErEyEs


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EvErEyEs
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Just a little something that happend this weekend.

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aww how sweet! i like it :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


this was a very warm poem i must say, its packed with love and compassion. the way you tell a story of two people coming together is both heartfelt and beautiful.

wonderful job!

-roshan

Posted 12 Years Ago


A little too cheerful for my taste; however it is indeed compassionate and sweet.I felt the emotions in a way

Posted 12 Years Ago


That is beautiful. I wish you nothing but the best. Thank you for sharing.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Speechless...... Just speechless.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Wow! This is soo amazing! Your really have talent! :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


This is written so beautifully... wow!

Posted 12 Years Ago


the strength of true love is told here..Great poem

Posted 12 Years Ago


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Tex
Great, wonderful, marvelous, I just love story telling through poetry. (as you can tell by my stuff) I feel like it is way under used. It just adds something special, an added layer.

You used poetry masterfully here, it softened the feel even more and added a depth to this sweet story that would have been missing in a straight story telling style.

Great Job! I love your work.

btw the picture for your "Who Are You" piece was masterful.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Tex

12 Years Ago

Best of luck hon. :) wife and I just hit our 34th year... you find the right guy and then... don't l.. read more
EvErEyEs

12 Years Ago

34th year that's great! you chose the right one.
Iam a very patient person never rush into .. read more
Tex

12 Years Ago

you go girl!
A heartwarming poem. It's good to know that the reunion proved true love never passes away despite lengthy separations.

Posted 12 Years Ago



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