I Will See You Again

Coming back to a childhood love.

We met in a childhood memory
Our paths parted when the big city I left
Together we swore never to forget
In your eyes I gazed
Hugged you tight as I silently wept 
To your ear my tears whispered
"I will see you again"
Years passed, we were getting older
Everyday we talked for hours
I heard you cry, I knew your pains, your life I knew better than my own
Friends we were, lovers we turned
We were closer than ever
"I will see you again"
I call one night, not but two words I said
"Come outside"
There you were eight years later
A boy I left, a man I found
You held me in your arms
I had never felt more alive
Our promise to never forget we had kept
Our lives as one again
This time we swore "Together We Wed"
"I did see you again"

Author's Note

Comment :)
Just a little something that happend this weekend.

Reviews

[MichaelGrisby]

This is nice...great job.

[Ohhhwillow]

This is so soft and touching, the line " to your ear my tears whispered" is just lovely, keep writing, nicely done!

[Siren]

Just a little something?! This sounds like a wonderful and ecstatic happening. Your poem is gentle--not demanding, but a gentle longing, and a soft, warm fulfillment. So very well done!

[erica]

wow this is very good...."this time we swore...together we wed...I did see you again" amazing amazing amazing

[Ahmad Cox]

Very sweet and beautiful sentiment. I could feel the emotion behind this piece. Very beautiful and heartfelt

[ur_ginger_girl]

great poem

[Shattered_Violet]

What a beautiful poem that woudl make a stunning short story as well. Hope everything works out for you... and keep on writing.

[Aristede Craig Jr]

Love is all hun sweet wine drunk dancing under loves trance romance is just a dance and you can stop when the music stops or keep dancing lovely beauty ....:) I like heart words...

[Emberlorna]

Awww :) I really love this one! Makes my heart swell at the end..

[thisis2]

Cool, I love the idea of two people being friends over such a long time and still ending up together.