Who Are You?

Who Are You?

A Poem by EvErEyEs
"

Just another Ex

"

"Oh" you're

Mr. Jealousy
The one who points out the waiter taking my order first, or who said my gynecologist was a lesbian and  obviously had the hots for me? 

"Oh" you're

The Bully
The man who grabbed my arm, pulled my hair, sat me down, and said "Do Not"

Who smiled outdoors and beats a women inside
"Oh" you're

The Two-Timer
The one who so kindly volunteers to drive my drunken female friend back to her condo, then call and say you fell asleep on her couch
"Oh" your're
The Betrayed
The one who always made me feel guilty, great at reverse psychology but used it not for good, but for torment.
"Oh" your're
Now just the Ex
The one "i no longer take anger, pain, and mistreats from"
Another dandelion seed head the wind blew

© 2012 EvErEyEs


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this is awesome, love this one

Posted 12 Years Ago


great poem


Posted 12 Years Ago


I loved this. Very straight forward and truthful. I know that in life, most of us have met this type of man... Hopefully whomever he was, he's out of your life for good, and just a faded memory.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Bad memories - They seem to chisel away at the mind and the fragments fall
The end allowed for dignity and new aspires in love - Good luck to whoever this was based on.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Sometimes you can fall into someone arms,and they think they have you but if you stand on your two feet you can walk away :) Edet Sira Rambling Poetry tis love is all

Posted 12 Years Ago


So sad and heartbreaking yet the end lines leave you with hope and inspiration. Sometimes we go through the pain and hurt to get to this place. Beautiful write!

Posted 12 Years Ago


This is written so beautifully! I think your poems should be published In books!

Posted 12 Years Ago


EvErEyEs

12 Years Ago

Thank you lots :)
I like it, though I don't understand the use of the quotation marks for some parts. I see the pattern for it, but I don't understand it. I like the titles for this guy, Mr.Jealousy, Two-Timers, Betrayed, etc. Really cool.


Posted 12 Years Ago


That's why I say: PICK A BOY WHO WILL LOVE YOU TO THE END!!
Greatly done by the way ^^

Posted 12 Years Ago


greatly done

Posted 12 Years Ago



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EvErEyEs

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