Who Are You?

Just another Ex

"Oh" you're

Mr. Jealousy
The one who points out the waiter taking my order first, or who said my gynecologist was a lesbian and  obviously had the hots for me? 

"Oh" you're

The Bully
The man who grabbed my arm, pulled my hair, sat me down, and said "Do Not"

Who smiled outdoors and beats a women inside
"Oh" you're

The Two-Timer
The one who so kindly volunteers to drive my drunken female friend back to her condo, then call and say you fell asleep on her couch
"Oh" your're
The Betrayed
The one who always made me feel guilty, great at reverse psychology but used it not for good, but for torment.
"Oh" your're
Now just the Ex
The one "i no longer take anger, pain, and mistreats from"
Another dandelion seed head the wind blew

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the poem. A strong ending to the poem. Sometime we will take enough and need to close the door forever. Thank you for the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[J.R.]

almost like lyrics to a song. Many more like this style but it still leads to a conclusion

[Danielle]

There is raw emotion in this which makes it very nice!

[Siren]

I love the structure. It's great. I can hear the continuing, deepening disappointment in every new "Oh". So great!

Loving your writing, friend! Keep sharing!

[devon]

Very good! I like the way it's written - like an angry woman, spitting out all the things he is at him.

:)

[erica]

this is awesome can't wait to read more by you

[hogan]

Love the last line, don't pick dandelions maybe a moral to this. A great piece of writing.

[ShaneBerry]

very nice, i like the way you write it. the physical lining of the words and of course the word choice coupled with the spacing makes it seem very fluid. more like a story rather than a poem, very very nice! than you for sharing.

[James William Dyer]

The last line was great. Nice write

[Moon]

I love it ! It is very painful when you find out that your lover is cheating on you . I would know . Great job !