Breathing

Breathing

A Story by EvErEyEs
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As i was driving this morning i closed my thoughts out to only the question of life and what its meant for?

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Why breathe?
We breath for life
To accept what we cannot change, other than only yourself, to come about life in meaningful ways filled with success in both our inner and outer cores
We breath for love
Not about buying someone flowers, or charming him or her, but the love for those who were placed around us as we came into this world, those who really belong in our lives
We breath to bring life itself
Life to other self beings whom create another part of you, who you are to guide for the time being, until they too breath to bring more life
not to bring life to lies, troubles, and hopelessness, and the ideas of self torture that rip us within.
We breathe to see
See worlds true beauty, to see beyond its top layers of violence and hatred
To only visualize what was first created before man kind was places on earth, creatures and beasts who are true owners of these lands we have turned into towns, cities, and polluted spaces, we must see deep in our souls and pull out the ones we are meant to be
We breathe for smiles
Smiles from the old and wise, to make them proud of the generations they brought forth, smiles that come from our parents, the ones who love us dear
not smiles of ignorance and hypocrisy that offend and break others with no need of works
they say a smile increases immunity
We breathe to speak
speak our minds that make each and everyone of us the unique people we are
Not to spit venom our inner grudges accumulate inside, call out turfs or colors
Breathing is a gift given to us by a greater power as we were created
Its a privilege of life, an unconditional necessity to exsist, it is what makes us whole
Breathing is the greatest pleasure in life
If we cannot breathe we are overwhelmed by a feeling of fear and distraught 
When you own your breath, nobody can steal your peace, no one can tell you what to be or who you are
Believe what is said is true "When the breath wanders the mind also is unsteady,  but when the breath is calmed the mind too will be still"
So live your lives, love others and yourself, bring life to everything you do, look at the beauties, and smile and contage others of it.
Tomorrow if you wake take a deep breath, you have another chance

© 2012 EvErEyEs


Author's Note

EvErEyEs
again i am not a writer just jot down watever is in mind. thanks :D
This i read out loud to myself with this peice of instumental music
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fFK2CITWjAw&feature=youtube_gdata_player

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this is a poem this is a beautiful painting that I paint over and over it is a closesd door with a doggy door to escape, but do you fit. Or do you break down the door ram it force it open, humanity forces the door open. When we had the key all along..... Just have to unlock it.... Beautiful

Posted 12 Years Ago


A thought provoking reflection on what is important in life.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Is this meant to be a poem or a story? A.J.

Posted 12 Years Ago


This is such a positive and uplifting piece to me :) Thank you for sharing this! You wrote it so well and sometimes we can create the most beautiful pieces by just letting our mind speak and our hands mold. Well done!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

EvErEyEs

12 Years Ago

exactly, thanks much :)
Wow, how can I put into words how moving this was?

100/100

Posted 12 Years Ago


EvErEyEs

12 Years Ago

Thank you :)
Very thought provoking & meditative. Everyone needs reminders like these to see how much daily life misaligns our values of what is truly important and to see the positive instead of spreading the negative. Thanks.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Brilliant


Posted 12 Years Ago


Beautiful words that speak only of positivity! great job!! :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


Very deep, your choice of words enhances the effect even more! :)


Posted 12 Years Ago


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Mia
"Tomorrow if you wake take a deep breath, you have another chance"
I love that line!
If you write and enjoy doing so you are a writer. What more could make a write but those two things? No rules or standards could take those two things away from you.


Posted 12 Years Ago


EvErEyEs

12 Years Ago

Thank you lots for those words :)

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