Haikus of my progressed Self-Hate

Haikus of my progressed Self-Hate

A Poem by Alex Fegley (Extro Zifer)
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Have some "cheery" Haikus.

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Love is wonderful.
Bringing happiness to all.
I have love for all.

"Spread the love", they said.
So I loved everyone.
Should have just loved One.

Filthy, rotten cheat.
Caught in a tunnel of lust.
Cannot be complete.

I'm a failure. 
Let me rot in self-pity.
Just throw me away.

Just a piece of trash.
Dirty and unworthy of,
All of their kind love.
Constantly flirty.
Swinging with all of the boys.
Just another s**t.
Your love is far more,
Than any that I deserve.
But yet you love me.
A piece of metal,
And an open flame will do.
Just another "X".
The pain is so fierce.
My skin blackens and bubbles.
I deserve it all.

© 2012 Alex Fegley (Extro Zifer)


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the ending says it all, from affection to the tragic moment of ridicule,
the syllable structure enhances the meaning with focus, excellent job.

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Added on June 9, 2012
Last Updated on June 11, 2012
Tags: Love, hate, cheating, failure, self hate, self pity, remorse, sorrow, sadness

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Alex Fegley (Extro Zifer)
Alex Fegley (Extro Zifer)

Grand Haven, MI



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I'm young and full of emotion. I tend to have sudden mood shifts and so far almost all of what I've written has come from the depressed side of the shift. I really just wanted to get my work out to th.. more..

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