Delectable Fortitude

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This is why you came here
This, possibly, is the result of sitting in the same spot
trying to remember the same thoughts
             the ones that slipped away
So, it’s just a matter of time now...
Rather, a sordid negligence for the realization that you can’t bring time down
or take it with you to say, in the minimal sense
             not in this place, not in this tense
And from that comes a certain tension--in mind or of it..
that every intention paid henceforth to ascertain an attention of “mine”
but in this case, above it
                                     --and in every way the same as the subversive retention and blame (but only in passing) of an aesthetic so passively ashen.
 Who could really feel like this?
  Could anyone be this pathetically passionate??

Reviews

[Moonflower]

This is an explosion of delicious metaphor, kudos. You made my mind shiver

[Exsanguination]

Well.... I'm honored to make your mind shake haha thank you. I still need to get around to all of yours, the ones I read are beautiful

[Moonflower]

You're welcome! Ill read more as well when my bro lets me on the computer (:

[Moonflower]

Aw and thanks you're too kind sir

[Sami Khalil]

"sitting in the same spot
trying to remember the same thoughts
the ones that slipped away "
A very nice write...:)

[Exsanguination]

Thank you, kind sir! I'm still an infant to this site, but I'll post more work soon and definetely check your stuff out.

[Sami Khalil]

To be honest I like poems more than stories . If you post some new ones( poems ) please send some read requests...:)

[Exsanguination]

How do I do that lol?

[Sami Khalil]

Look to the right of the top of your page you will see read request , click on that , it will take you to your friends list , click on the small box next to each one whom you want them to read , then at the end it will say send , click send the close ...Good luck...

[Exsanguination]

Indeed. Thank you so much

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)