That instant

With your face cradled within my hands

Your eyes widened with special wonder

Lips slightly apart, trembling with doubt

Breaths coming short and jerky.

Say nothing for there’s nothing to say

In this moment created for us

Lower your eyes and struggle a sigh

Because we will soon become us

 

Tomorrow we will not be the same

Because nothing will ever be new

We will repeat but never recover

The instant of welcomed union.

Fingers course across my cheek

Your eyes closed tight in anguish

A sudden cry in the language of love

And you are more beautiful than all your yesterdays

Reviews

[J. J. Nightingale]

Wow ... Heat .. and Romance .. I hear the music !

Good One David ! :)

Jasmine xx

[Baby Ricochet]

Ah Romance. Good one Doc....................

[DrD]

Yes, romance. What else is there, BR? Oh, there's sex, right? Almost forgoet about that.

[TL Boehm]

intimate, romantic, sensual - this is a blissful passionate write. Wonderful stuff

[DrD]

You're most kind and I deeply appreciate your comments.

[Frieda P]

Stunning Dave, you speak in the language of love. There's passionate heat coming off your page, the purest kind when two hearts mingle.

One teeny suggestion, I'd change 'Because we will soon become us' to 'one'....only because you used 'us' in the line before it, but that's just me, either way I adore it.

[DrD]

Thanks, Frieda. Missed you lots and it's good to be back.