Beyond The Fourth WallA Story by Exen EssimoA twist on adventure story's Our Hero goes on a great quest learning about he world he lives in and beyond it.Beyond the
4th Wall By Nick
Lambert This is our
hero. Strong and brave he fights for what's right. "Who
the hell is that?" said our hero. He's yet to understand that he is part
of our story- "Who
are you? Where are you hiding? Get out of my house!" Why I am the narrator
of the story. And I'm not hiding in your house. I mean, well, I am but I'm
everywhere as well but- "Ok
this isn't funny anymore what's going on?" As I was
saying, our hero is preparing to go on a great quest of discovery. "I'm
eating breakfast. You know what I'll just call you a fairy and move on with
it." As our hero begins to come to terms with the narrator, he questions
what is this great quest he is about to embark on. "Is
this where I'm supposed to ask what my destiny is or something?" Asked our
hero, and yes this is when you begin to question your destiny. "Ok
could you please stop narrating my speaking I know when I'm speaking"
demanded our hero- "You did it again!" If I don't say when you're
speaking and how you said it how is the reader supposed to understand what's
going on? "What
reader?" Our hero was curious but he will find answers to his questions
soon enough. "Why can't you tell me?" Said as our hero walked outside
to his porch. "I'm still eating I'm not walking to my porch." He
groaned as he began walking out to his porch "you know what fine I'll go
on the porch but I'm bringing my breakfast." Out on the porch he found a
sword and shied with a note he read the note. "I guess I'll read the
note..... To our hero. From plot continuity." Our hero read out loud.
"Who is plot continuity?" You don't have to know what it is all you
need to know is to not mess with it. "I'll take your word for it." He put down
his breakfast and armed the sword and shield. "Ok so I have this sword and
shield now what am I supposed to do with it?" Our hero would soon find out
what his quest is but before that he had to go to the village to find the wise
old man. "I
really have to walk all the way to the village it's like half way across the
valley." Our hero complained as he reluctantly began to walk down the path
toward the village. "I'm
not really being given a choice am I?" No you're
not being given a choice, now could you get moving we need to move the story
along.
He neared
the village not to long after he began his trek. "What do you mean not so
long after he began? It's been an hour!" If our hero could stop correcting
the narrator it would add to the illusion of time and struggle. "You
got the struggle part right. Also you know you didn't have to commentate the
entire time I was waking here, I know how I walk and I know what the scenery
looks like" our hero retorted with an annoyed tone. And if our hero thinks
the traveling commentary was to boring the writer could always take it out. "No
that's not what I was thinking. And who the hell is this writer you keep
talking about" the hero would soon find out his quest when he arrived at
the old man’s house. "Way to
dodge the question. And how am i supposed to find the wise old man’s
house?" Our hero questioned as he walked into the village where he noticed
the old man’s house on the hill. "I was
on the hill before why didn't you tell me before! Now I have to walk back up
there." The hero said as he realized the wise old man’s house was actually
right in front of him. "Really?
Is it going to be like this the whole time?" Wondered our hero thinking he
could not have been told which house the old mans was making him search every
building for the wise old man. "Fair
enough, I have to keep your story moving along don't I?" He said
sarcastically. He moved up
and knocked on the door after a long moment the door opened and behind it was a
wise old man "Can it
be?" said the wise old man "It is,
it is the narrator" "You
know the narrator?" Said our hero. "yes I
know the narrator, the narrator lead me on a quest long ago. I thought I would
never have to deal with the narrator again" said the wise old man as if he
didn't enjoy the presence of the narrator. "Because I didn't negotiate the
presence of the narrator" he lied. "Is
this what I'm going to have to deal with the whole time?" "If he
asked you to go on a great quest, than yes he will be following you the whole
time" "Am I
supposed to ask you what the great quest is?" "I
would assume so if the narrator hasn't told you already" Our hero
asked the wise old man what the great quest he has to embark on is. "Would
you please let me say things without telling me what to say." "That
will happen a lot. Any way I assume you have been brought here to discover what
lays beyond the fourth wall." "The
fourth wall?" "Yes
the ancients built four walls surrounding the kingdom. No one knows what lays
beyond the fourth wall." "Did you
take on this quest once ?" "Yes
long ago when I was young like you the narrator made me go see a wise old man
who told me to find out what lies beyond the fourth wall" "Sounds
familiar, I wonder why." Before they
parted ways the wise old man asked our hero what his name was Our hero
began to talk before the wise old man could. "You don't even need to ask
my name's ummmmm. Uh, how could I forget my own name?" He was so confused
even though he knew the answer. "I really don't know the answer" he
proclaimed. Our hero remembered that his name was Our Hero. "You've got to
be kidding me?" He acted as if it was a joke. The wise old
man spoke up "No this isn't a joke the narrator did this to me as we'll. I
was called The Hero and now I'm the Wise old man. I don't remember my name
before the quest." Our Hero
responded quickly "So my name from now on is Our hero?" And it was
true his name was and will be until the writer decides to change it.
"Who's the writer!?" The wise old
man let out a laugh and continued to do so as he spoke. "I almost forgot
about the writer" "Seriously
who's this writer and how is he connected to the reader?" "You'll
find out soon enough" whispered the wise old man. There was a long pause
before the wise old man spoke again. "I see your shield has an S on
it." Our Hero
looked puzzled. "Why is there a random S on it?" The wise old
man laughed. "where I'm from S is a symbol for hope." "Doesn't
hope start with an H?" The wise old
man laughed again. "Yes it does, but in life you must think with an open
mind." "You
make no sense what so ever." It was time for Our Hero to leave. "But-" The wise old
man interrupted him. "You herd the narrator now run along." "Thanks
for everything" Our Hero left the house and he had no back talk toward the
narrator for once. As Our Hero
walked out the door the wise old man had one last piece of advice "make
sure to listen to the narrator" Our Hero
gave a nod and walked back out into the village. Not so long
after he began to hear his stomach grumble. "That's because I never
finished eating my breakfast" but that's what happens when you choose the
life of an adventurer. "I didn't choose the adventures life the adventures
life choose me" he whispered to himself knowing he did choose this life.
As Our Hero
was walking along the path that leads to the first wall he saw a stump along
the side of the path with something on it as he neared closer he noticed it was
a sandwich that was resting on the stump. "Sweet
I can eat!" Shouted Our Hero, and as he put the sandwich up to his lips he
was startled by a dog bark coming from not to far from behind him. "What
dog bark?" "Woof!"
"Oh
sweet heavens! I really should listen to the narrator more often." Our
Hero said still catching his breath. He noticed the dog looked very
malnourished and out of the kindness of his heart he gave the sandwich to the
dog. "Why can't we split it" asked Our Hero forgetting that it was
part of the plot to give the dog the sandwich. "What if I want to eat the
sandwich and not follow the plot?" The dog sat about a foot away from him
whimpering with his tongue keeping his eyes in the sandwich. "You know
what you win I'll give the dog the sandwich"
Our Hero
followed the plot continuity and fed the dog the sandwich. The dog ate
the sandwich and wrapped himself around Our Hero's legs. Our Hero's companion
made quick friends with Our Hero. "I
guess this is my dog now. What type of dog even is this?" Asked Our Hero,
but the dog is whatever type of dog the reader wants it to be. "I'm not
even going to ask about the reader again. But before we start going you need
name." It was weird he said this because the dog was already named Our
Hero's companion. "No
he's not being called that!" He announced, but that would break the plot
continuity wouldn't it? "Yes it would I'm calling him Exen and that's
final!" It was an odd name for a dog who already had a name which is what
he will be referred to as. "Do what you want I'm calling him Exen, now
aren't I supposed to be moving along or something" He was right
Our Hero and Our Hero's companion continued toward the first wall together.
The first
wall came into view. "Thanks
for saying that. Like I didn't notice the giant wall stretching the
horizon" his sarcasm was unappreciated because how else would the reader know
Our Hero was approaching the first wall? "They
could figure it out, oh and by the way you're welcome for describing the
scene" Our Hero should really stop antagonizing the narrator and focus on
the first test in his quest. (See what I did there) "Yes haha your very
funny know what is supposed to happen here?" Asked Our Hero before he
approached the guard watching the gate. "Who
goes there!?" Shouted the guard. "I am
Our Hero" he yelled still quite far from the gate. "What
kind of name is that" the guard responded trying not to laugh. "Woah
what is that." He was surprised by the presence of the narrator. Our Hero
with a sympathetic tone groaned "don't worry it's just a fairy" The guard
lowered his guard and with a smile said "oh you kids and you magic these
days, sorry about that, is there anything I could help you with" "Yes
I'd like to get through the first wall" "I can
do that for you son but just be aware beyond this wall lies some creatures that
can do harm to you" "Some?" "Yeah
we're told to warn travelers but I don't know what it's like over there." "Alright
good to know." The guard opened the gate. The opening mechanism rattled The guard
motioned them through the entrance with some final words. "I guess your
fairy likes to point out the obvious. Anyway good luck." As Our Hero
walked beyond the first wall he turned back to say "yeah, thanks." On
the back of the wall over the gate there was an engraving in the wall saying
(He who does not understand thinks with a closed mind) Our Hero didn't
understand what it meant and walked on.
About
halfway to the second wall the path was along a stream, and sense Our Hero and
Our Hero's companion were parched they decided it would be a good time to get
some water. "But
I'm not thirty I'm hungry, I don't want to get a drink, I want something to
eat. " Our Hero said fully knowing he wants to get a drink of water. "No I
don't want to get a drink of water." Our Hero
stood next to the stream as if to get a drink of water but he only stood there
talking to himself. "You
know what fine if I drink some water can we move on" and with that Our
Hero and Our Hero's companion actually walked up to the stream and drank some
of the water. Little did
Our Hero know the water was poisoned! How foolish of him to drink the water. "Really!
You make me drink the water then you tell me it's poisoned after!" Our Hero's
companion dropped first lying to the ground while Our Hero was on his knees
struggling to remain conscious. Our Hero let out the only words he could muster
in this moment "Exen, we'll be fine; I know we'll be fine. They wouldn't
want the story to end now would they?" And he was right although he closed
his eyes there by the stream next to his companion this isn't the end of the
story.
Our Hero
woke up with his companion licking his face. It made him smile knowing he had
just dodged death after his own folly. The joy was short lived though when
three bandits were coming toward Our Hero. Wait this
isn't part of the story! Our Hero quick get up and armed they're trying to ruin
the story! "What
are bandits doing out here!?" It's the
editors, peers and critics! You can't let them defeat you. "I know
that, I'd like to live through this." The three bandits stood some 12.384
meters from Out Hero. "This
story is over!" Yelled the bandits. They remained there and stood with an
intimidating stance. Our hero
responded not to the bandits but to himself "you gave me this sword and
shield I don't know how to use it!" And as he said that he remembered his
years of training. "What
years of training? I've never used a sword and shield in my life!" If Our
Hero would just remembered that he could use the sword and shield with
proficiency it would help. "Fine
I'll try that" Our Hero whispered as he swung the sword as if he had used
it many times before. The three
bandits marched forward while saying stereo typical derogatory statements like
"This story sucks!" "The plot made no sense!" And "The
writer put no effort in to it!" They should have known better than to
insult the writer. Our Hero let
out at almost a cry "can the writer help me!" While Our Hero just
stood there as our Hero's companion charged the oncoming bandits. He wouldn't
let his companion go into combat alone would he. "How did I get put in
this mess?" Our Hero was
now charging head long toward the bandits close behind his companion. Our Hero's
companion leaped onto the first of the bandits. The bandit was brought to the
ground quickly. His last moaning words were "but their are grammatical
errors." The other two
stood face to face with Our Hero,they swung their weapons at nearly identical
times. Our Hero was able to block the blows with his shield but the force of
the impact knocked him to the ground. While Our Hero's companion was still
dealing with his foe and unable to help Our Hero. He sprung
back to his feet dodging swing after swing, but the attacks came so quick he
was unable to attempt a counter. And just
when he appeared beaten he spotted their weakness. "If you
could tell me what it is that would be great" said Our Hero dogging
another potential blow. Ah yes, Our Hero noticed their weakness was obsession
over mistakes. He thought if he could make a minor mistake that wouldn't result
in his demise he could distract them long enough for him to finish them. Our Hero
whispered under his breath "Good to know." He then stumbled over his
feet and tumbled to the ground theatrically The bandits
dropped their form and began criticizing his theatrics "Really?
Like really you can't even keep your footing wow. What kind of fighter trips in
the middle of a fight scene? How anti cli-" before they could even finish
Our Hero sprung up with a skillful strike to send his foes to the ground
slumped and silenced. Our Hero sat
to recuperate his breath and strength. Our Hero's
companion trotted away from the body he had mangled and into the lap of Our
Hero. He patted his head and with joy in his voice panted "good work Exen,
I knew there was a reason I liked you." There's no
convincing Our Hero his name is Our Hero's companion is there? "Nope"
The second
wall was now in sight of the duo. "You
should mention it's twice the size of the last one" Our Hero interrupted.
You know if you let me finish what I'm saying sometimes I would point certain
things out. As I was saying, Our Hero and his companion came up to the gate of
the second wall to find that there was no guard watching the gate. "How am
I supposed to pass then?" If only Our Hero knew he could figure out how to
open the gate. "The
guard was right you do like to point out the obvious" The gate was
locked by a sophisticated mechanism, there were multiple switches and buttons
on the side of the gate, Our Hero could figure out the right order in which to
pull the levers and push the buttons the gate will open. "Am I
supposed to just guess?" He pulled a lever and nothing happened.
"Wrong lever" While Our
Hero was struggling with the gate Our Hero's companion was sniffing along a
part if the wall. He sat down and began to bark at it. Our Hero
noticed and shouted over "you found something Exen?" He walked over
to where Our Hero's companion was sitting. Our Hero began pressing the stones
in front of where his companion sat down. And one of
the stones pressed in to reveal a message and he read it out loud. "Great
Hero's push forward and pull themselves up no matter how down they are."
Our Hero stepped back and thought about the message. "So I
have to push a button than turn the leaver up than down to open the gate."
That was correct but he knew he needed more information. "How am
I supposed to figure out which buttons to push and what lever to use?" If only
there was another hidden message for Our Hero to find. "Why
can't Exen just find it like the first one?" Our Hero's companion became
distracted by a flower caught in the breeze and was unable to help Our Hero. "Why
can't anything be simple for once" asked our hero knowing an easy task
leads to a boring story. "Could you give me a hint at least?" Why
can't Our solve his own problems for once? "You
know what I'll do this one all by myself you don't need to say anything I'll do
it all myself." So our hero
is going to narrate this section all by himself? "Yeah,
don't worry I got this." I'm more
concerned about the reader than you. "You've
got nothing to worry about, see watch this. Our Hero searched the walls for
more clues. Uh, after a moment of searching he could find nothing that would
help him." That wasn't
half bad. How about this, Our Hero couldn't find any clues one the wall so he
began to search the ground near the gate. "See I
knew you would help me." Out Hero
walked over to the entrance of the gate and began searching the ground for
anything that might help him open the gate. "Is
there anything specific I should be looking for?" Asked Our Hero, but no
one knew what he should be looking for. "So you
mean to tell me you don't even know what I should be looking for?" Yeah that's
about right. Our Hero was
puzzled but he continued to search. "Why
doesn't our narrator inform Our Hero he has great problem solving skills?"
Why can't Our Hero refer things by the right name? "Sorry.
Why doesn't THE NARRATOR! Inform Our Hero he has great problem solving
skills?" That's what I thought, Our Hero remembered his great ability to
solve problems, puzzles and come up with clever remarks. "Why
clever remarks?" Pondered Our Hero knowing he would thank the narrator
later. "Remind
me when that happens, but first." Our Hero examined the area near the gate
and discovered nothing. But as he glanced over at Our Hero's companion he
noticed what was drifting in the wind was a butterfly not a flower. He ran over
and caught the butterfly in his hands and examined it. The pattern on the
butterfly consisted of three bars and three dots. Much like how the gate had
three levers and three buttons. The middle dot and the top bar were colored
differently than the rest. After Our
Hero noticed this he let out a sigh and whispered. "Why not give it a
try." Our Hero
walked over and pushed the middle button and pulled the top lever up and down. It took a
moment for the gate to open but when it did Our Hero let out a laugh and joyed
"didn't think it would actually work." As he walked
through the gate he read the message on the back of the wall and it read. "I
think there for I am"
The Third
wall hadn't even come into view when he was forced into another conflict. "What
is it this time?" Our Hero blurted in a sarcastic tone. "Why
can't I move?" Our Hero and his companion became frozen in place and the
world seemed still. "What's
going on!" Nervousness as well as fear could be sensed in his voice. "Could
you please tell me what is going on!?" Our Hero!
The writer has been struck with writers block! You need to do something or the
story will end here! "How am
I supposed to fix this? I don't even know who the writer is!" Our Hero
seemingly forgot everything he remembered in the last scene. "What
when you gave the problem diving skills?" No the other
thing! "Clever
remarks!?" Yes! Say
something clever to spark the writers mind! "Uh uh,
The writer sought inner inspiration to continue the story" Our Hero's
words were uttered in vain as the environment around him began to disappear
into dust. Our Hero's companion began to panic whimper and howl. It's obvious
it didn't work could you please try something else now! "Um,
the writer sought inspiration in our hero and don't want to leave his story
incomplete!" Shouted Our Hero with a trace of tremble in his tone. The
landscape continued to deteriorate around his still body. For someone who has
clever statement skills this isn't working to well at all. "You're
the one who gave me the skills! Do you have any bright ideas?" You're Our
Hero you're the one who's supposed to save the day not the narrator. "We'll
if we don't come up with something fast we'll both be goners." All that
was left was Our Hero, his companion and the immediate ground around them. "I got
it! The writer thought of a cool fighting sequence with a dragon in the next scene!"
Shouted Our Hero at the top of his lungs. The
environment around them began to come back in a great scene rebuilding to the
way it was. Slowly Our Hero and his companion regained the ability to move
again. It seems Our Hero has inspired the writer to keep the story going. But
why would he create such a great enemy for himself?
The third
wall was three times as big as the first wall making it an awe of a sight. But
something was different about this wall. In top of the gate stood a spire
reaching even higher into the sky. "What's
in the tower? There hasn't been one before." Questioned Our Hero. He would
find out what the tower holds after he defeats the enemy's that lye defending
it. "Enemy's?
As in plural enemy's? As in theres more than one?" Yes there
are the towers guards and the dragon you had suggested earlier "Oh I
really didn't think that through did I." It was your idea wasn't it? "I
panicked ok." Well you
want to hear the bad news? "Enlighten
me." A tremendous
roar came from behind the wall shaking the ground and striking fear into Our
Hero. Even our Hero's companion grew fearful. "Oh
this isn't going to be fun." Over the
wall peered the head of a great dragon. It roared again and shook the ground
even harder. The dragon
began to take flight. The force of its wings created great winds kicking up
dust and forcing Our Hero to brace. His companion griping to the ground with
great might. The dragon
flew high above circling in the air above Our Hero. As if he were honing in on
his prey. "That's
real assuring thanks." Quivered Our Hero. The dragon
dived down directly toward Our Hero. The dive was steep making it gain
incredible speed. It pulled
out of its dive only a few feet of the ground. The power of the gust was enough
to knock Our Hero to the ground and cause him to slide even further. The Dragon
tried to grasp Our Hero with his talons but he was able to block the challenges
with his shield, while he was still on the ground the dragon tried again but
this time Our Hero was able to roll out of the way and onto his feet. Before he
could even reorientation himself the dragon had swung his tail around and
landed a direct hit on Our Hero causing him to be swept off the ground and
flung back an even greater distance than before. Lying on his
back Our Hero was in visible pain. Looking up at the sky he thought to himself
how could he ever defeat such a foe? Our Hero's
companion ran over to Our Hero as quick as he could and began to lick his face.
"I got
an idea Exen but you're going to have to trust me." Our Hero's companion
sat still continuing to pant. "I'm
going to need you to distract the dragon, can you do that?" Our Hero's
companion let out a bark and ran off. Our Hero
slowly rose to his feet with ache in his stance. The dragon
began chasing after Our Hero's companion but didn't take flight. Our broke into
a sprint after the dragon to catch it. He came
closer and closer behind its tail reaching for it. Stretching as far as he
could to grasp it. He reached further and further with each stride until he
gained hold. As soon as he had a firm hand on its tail he lost his footing and
was being dragged behind the dragon. He mustered as much strength as he could
to pull himself up. Hand over hand until his full body was on. When he reached its
torso he tried to stand but couldn't keep his balance so he only rise to his
knees and thrusted his sword as hard as he could into the dragons spine. A high
pitches screech and from the dragoon piercing Our Hero's ear with such trauma
he lost his grip on the sword and fell to the ground. Covering his ears and
rolling in agony the dragon fell next to him and let out one last groan before
life left its body. Our Hero
laid on the ground in exhaustion, when he looked over he saw his companion
doing the same. A few minutes
had past and both Our Hero and his companion continued to rest when another
feint roar could be heard in the distance. Our Hero
groaned "please don't tell me what I think that is." And it was,
another dragon had peered its self over the wall and spotted Our Hero. "Why
are there two of them!?" Proclaimed Our Hero. He had to come to the
realization that there was already supposed to be a dragon in this scene but in
his courageousness he brought on a second one to fight him. "You've
got to be kidding me" but this wasn't a joke The dragon
lifted itself over the wall and let out a massive ball of fire when it exhaled.
"It breathes
fire!" Yes it does,
this is a plot twist dragon it can do things normal dragons can't. "Is
there anything else you want to warn me about?" We'll have
to find out "Great"
Our Hero walked up the body of the dead dragon and pulled his sword from its back.
Like the
last one it flew high into the air and began to circle above. But something was
different about the appearance of this one. Our Hero
could notice that not only was it larger than the last one but the scales
covering it appeared thicker as well. "I
suppose my tactics from the last bout won't work this time will they?" Our
Hero continued to think, how could he even get close to it. If he has his
companion distract him the dragon would fry him in no time. A moment of
realization stuck Our Hero and it was visible his face. "What
did you say was defending the tower other than the dragon?" There are
scores of guards in the spire waiting for you. "Good I
hope they're looking for a fight." Our Hero
dashed for the door in the wall with his companion instep with him. Trailing
them was the plot twist dragon gaining on them quickly. This time fire didn't
come from its mouth but ice freezing all life it touched. "Run
come on!" Shouted Our Hero as he dived toward the door with an icy death
not to far behind them. Inside the
doorway it was quite. Ice froze the ground just outside of it and the dragons
roars echoed in and through the walls. The feint
sounds of men talking could be heard above. Our Hero let
out a deep breath and yelled. "There's an intruder at the gate!" The sound of
men chattering was replaced with sound of metal cloaking and running. "Let's
hope this works" Out Hero ran out the door and into a ditch alongside the
door. A few seconds later a stream of guards came rushing out into the area by
the wall searching for the 'intruder' or the guard who raised the alarm. All
they could find was an angry plot twist dragon looking for something to fight.
Luckily the guards were up for it One of the
guards shouted to the rest "it's trying to destroy the wall!" The
guards rushed forward to challenge the dragon and we're meeting stiff
resistance. "This
is my chance" Our Hero left the ditch and rushed the door. Once he was
back inside everything was quiet. It seemed all the guards came out to meet the
threat. He began
running up the stairs. "There's
a lot of stairs can't we just skip to the part where I reach the top?"
Does Our Hero really want to suck the enjoyment out of this? "Yes he
does." Well that's too bad for Our Hero. He peered
out a window and saw the guards were still occupied with fighting the dragon.
He continued to run up the stairs and after some time he reached the top and
there was a door to a room. The door was locked so he tried knocking on the
door. There was no response. So he backs up and lowered his shoulder into the
door. It didn't budge. So he backed up and put even more power into his effort.
This time the door busted open. What he found in the room was something he was
not expecting. There in the
back corner of the room sat a beautiful woman. They stared
at each other for a long moment in silence. The silence
was broken when the beautiful woman asked "who are you?" He was slow
to respond "I-I'm Our Hero" "Who's
that talking?" The beautiful woman was frightened by the narrator’s
presence. "That, who-who is that?" "Oh,
that's the narrator. Um you can say it’s kind of a fairy." "Great,
a guy named Our Hero with a dog and a fairy who points out the obvious have come
to rescue me!" Only a fool could miss the sarcasm in her voice. Our Hero
paused before he responded "rescue you?" That
statement made the beautiful woman's jaw drop. "Why
yes rescue me! Isn't that what you came all this way for!?" Our Hero
looking down at the ground and responded. "Not
exactly. No-" he was cut off. "Don't
you have any idea who I am?" "I'm-I'm
sorry no" it was a shy response from Our Hero. "I'm
the Beautiful princes of the kingdom, daughter of the king and queen." "May I
ask you what your name is?" "Of course!
My name is, my name is..." She couldn't seem to find the words "how
could I forget my own name!?" Our Hero
chimed in "Um, narrator can you help her out." Yes, I can,
she remembered her name was princess. She was
quick to respond "princess is just a title not my name." She tried
and tried but the only thing that could come to her head was princess. Princes in a
quiet voice whispered "this is beside the point." Our Hero
looked back at Princes "well you said something about saving you, care to
elaborate?" "Yes,
years ago I was put here by my parents to wait for a prince who could rescue
me. But you look hardly the part." "Well
what does the damsel in distress wish to do? Does she stay here and wait. Our
does she leave with Our Hero?" "If you
were enough of a man you'd make me leave with you!" "I'm
currently more worried about fighting a dragon than your decision to be
honest." "Wait
your fighting the dragon?" "Yeah I
fought one off and I was planning on not letting the second one kill me." "There's
two?" "Long story.
But what are you going to pick?" "How
about this you finish off the dragon and get back to me when you're done and
I'll have my mind made up." "That's
assuming I don't die" "Yeah."
Our Hero
walked past Princes to the window which over looked where the dragon was still
fighting the guards. Our Hero ran
back out the door and down the stairs and Princes pointed to the sky probably
addressing the narrator saying "I don't know what I think about you
yet" Our Hero
reached a door which lead to the top of the wall. When he walked out on to the
wall he could see the guards laying on the ground motionless but no signs of
the dragon. It was when
he turned around he noticed the dragon was aim directly toward him. "Thanks
for the heads up this time" Our Hero turned, looked and dogged the
impending strike. The dragon
started to circle back around to have another chance at Our Hero. "Why do
I think if these things." Whispered Our Hero to himself as the dragon made
a straight path to him. He backed up to the end of the wall. The dragon grew
closer spitting fire into the area near Out Hero, He made a run up and leaped
over the lip of the wall and onto the dragon as it flew by. "This
was a very bad idea!" He griped the dragon as hard he could trying not to
fall off to what would be a certain doom. The dragon shook and dove but Our
Hero held strong. He tried to
plunge his sword into the dragon but its skin was too thick. Our Hero really
should have thought this through before he jumped on the dragon. "Tel me
something I don't know!" The wind rushing across his face forcing tears to
come out of his eyes. He climbed
up toward the dragons head, his hands becoming weaker and weaker as he moved
along. The dragon
tried vigorously swinging its neck trying to lose Our Hero. He sat at the brow
of the dragons head and this time he aimed for its eye. His body was unsettled
causing his first attempt to miss its target. He eased his
body and aimed again. He wouldn't miss the second time, the sword pierced the
weak spot causing an almost immediate reaction for the dragon. In agony the
dragon lost control if it's flight and began spiraling out of control. Fire,
ice, and even lightning came from the mouth of the dragon. With a loud
thud the dragon slammed into the spire. The sword slipped out of the eye and
Our Hero lost his grip. He began to
free fall toward the ground looking up at the sky he could see the spire
trembling and the dragon in agony falling toward the ground. Then
everything went black. When he woke
up he was on the wall, he could see part of the spire had collapsed. His ears
rang and he lacked the energy to move. After a few
moments his companion and Princes stood over him. Her lips were moving but he
couldn't understand what she was trying to say. He just laid
there not even making an attempt to respond or comprehend her. She propped
him up against the wall and Our Hero's companion jumped into his lap. The
ringing began to dissipate and he could start to hear things again. He couldn't
tell he was yelling but he was. "What were you trying to say!?" Princes
smiled and looked at the ground. When she looked back up she repeated what she
had said before "I'm going to go with you." This kind of
surprised Our Hero. "You're what?" "Well.
You came all this way and I've been stuck here for a while and I want to join
you." Our Hero
exhaled before he responded. "Do you wish to know what I'm actually doing
all the way out here? "It has
to be for a good reason and you said it wasn't me." "Well
you see I'm trying to reach the fourth wall." She let out
a laugh "You're doing what?" "I'm
trying to see what's on the other side of the fourth wall." "You're
insane no one sense the ancients has been past the fourth wall" "No one
till now." Princes
turned around and began walking toward an entrance to the interior of the wall.
"Wait here I'll be back" He leaned
back into the wall and closed his eyes to rest. When he woke
up princes was standing in the door way with shimmering amour and battle gear. Our Hero sat
in silence stating at Princes. She was
first to speak. "Well our you going to just sit there and stare at me or
our you going to join me." Our Hero got
up and walked toward the entrance where she was standing. When he brushed by he
spoke to her "shouldn't I be asking you to join me?" Traces of charm
were in his voice.
"So let
me get this straight. You were just eating breakfast and this voice told you to
go on a quest to the fourth wall and you did it?" Asked Princes. She was
still confused about Our Hero's reasons for being out here and the concept of
the narrator. "Oh yeah I almost forgot about you." Our Hero
chuckled "Yeah pretty much, you get use to the narrator after a
while." Princes
looked back at our Hero. "But other than that why our you out here? Why
did you come all this way, surely it must be more than just to go past the
fourth wall." "Well
at first I didn't know what I was getting into, but I guess after a while I
started to enjoy the adventure."he paused before he finished "Why did
you join me when you didn't have to?" "Being
locked in that tower deprived me of the world. I've wanted to go and travel the
world all my life and when you showed up and said you were going to travel even
further I couldn't turn that down. Even what you said just now makes me feel
better knowing that you enjoy adventuring." "Why
did you give me such a hard time then?" "People
usually wait for me to open the door before they break it down." "Fair
enough." The two
walked in silence after this. "Wait
wait" interrupted princes "I still haven't asked about what's at the
fourth wall?" There was a
silence that no one broke for some time unlit Our Hero whispered in a low tone
"I guess we'll have to wait and see." Now the two
walked along in silence. Seeing that they had nothing to add or do to interrupt
the narrator or prolong the scene
Even though
the group was still a ways away from the wall they could see it because of its
sheer size. It truly was a sight to behold. Pieces of land were missing leaving
holes in the terrain which looked like entrances to the void. Mountains in the
distance looked like ghost and had a type of transparency to them. Our Hero
raised a question "w-why is the landscape like this?" Out this far
rifts are created in the land because when the world was made the writer added
no land to those areas leaving what we know as rifts. "So
these rifts what were to happen if someone went into one" They would
turn into dust and vanish, where they go, no one knows. "Defiantly
something to stay away from." The farther
they went the more rifts there were and the larger they became. Looking off
into the horizon there was nothing, all that was left was the area around the
path and splotches of land nearby. A stark
expression grew In both of them as the environment became bleak. Stood in the
path were five men in robes. They said nothing nor did they move at all, they
stood completely motionless in the middle of the narrow way. Our Hero's
companion started to growl at the men in robes. Our Hero
looked up and said "Any idea who they are or what they do? Instead of just
saying they're there why not tell us what they're going to do." His voice
was quite and light. These are
the ancients. They're here to stop anyone who tries to even approach the fourth
wall. "So
were going to have to fight them is what you're saying." Yes a fight seems
imminent. "Well
what can they do?" That's the
thing, nobody noes. "You
mean to tell me not even you know what we're going up against?" Yeah that's
right. I never said I was all knowing. "Great"
Our Hero looked over toward Princes and his companion "any ideas?" Princes was
quick to retort "yeah not die. Our Hero
shot her a look "thanks that was real helpful." She smiled and looked
away. Our Hero
stepped back and thought. After a moment his face lit up. "I got an idea,
Narrator tell me I found a javelin or something along the side of the
path." Alright, Our
Hero found a javelin on the side of the path and picked it up. He looked at the
javelin and whispered "let's see how this works." He made a
run up then flung the javelin toward the ancients. It was well aimed and was
heading directly toward the ancient in the center. But right before it reached
its target the ancients body turned to smoke causing the Javelin to go right
through. Our Hero
stood silence and stunned at what he had just witnessed. Princes in
awe shuttered "How are we supposed to do this if we can't hit them!?"
If only they remembered theirs other ways they could go about this. They both
spoke in unison "the rifts!" The group
ran around one of the rifts near the path so they we're directly across from
where they were. The ancients
began to walk directly toward them, slowly they came to the edge of the rift
and walked into darkness. Our Hero
seemed stunned. "There's no way it's that easy." And it wasn't they
reappeared directly in front of them "um didn't you say things disappeared
into rifts?" They ran away as fast as they could trying to keep as much
distance between them as possible. "What
are we supposed to do now!?" They were back in the path running toward the
wall with the ancients in pursuit. If only Our
Hero remembered that there are other ways he could solve his problems. "You
mean like what I did with the javelin?" Yes similar
to what you did with the javelin, elaborate more on that idea. "Uh the
ancients disappeared leaving an easy trip for the group." The ancients
did not fade nor did they slow down. It would not be that simple. Princes In
an annoyed tone let out "what do you mean it's too simple!" If Our Hero
could remember the full situation he is in maybe he would understand what he
could do. He stopped
his stride and faced the ancients. "That's
it, it's a story, his whole thing is a story, I have the ability to change the
story the writer sets. And if the writer doesn't like it, then it won't
happen." He went even further. "The writer wants a good story so
things are created to make it interesting and if they ruin the story they our
removed." Princes ran
back toward Our Hero screaming "would you do something instead of just
standing there!" Our Hero
grinned in the face of the ancients, his companion stood by his side. He
needled down to his companion and pet him. "You
want to learn a new trick Exen?" Our Hero's
companion wagged his tail enthusiastically and barked. "Alright,
how about this. Exen speak!" When his
companion barked a sonic wave came out. The force of the wave was so great the
ancient it hit simply vanished not in to dust or smoke. It just vanished never
to return again. Our Hero
laughed "It worked!" Princes
stood stunned but not silenced. "You
think I could try something like that?" They shot each other a smile and
after a moment Our Hero apparently came up with something. "Princes
remembered her ability to...to...ummm" he didn't actually have an idea. Princes has
one though. "Princes remembered her knowledge of sorcery." Princes
swung her sword causing a blast of fire to eject out and eliminate another
ancient. Our Hero
just stood back and smiled. "Have fun with it." We're his only words. Prince and
Our Hero's companion tried different things to finish the ancients, Ice, fire,
lighting, and other magical auras started to fly around. As the last
ancient vanished Our Hero trumped "What is this sorcery!" The
excitement was short lived though, when they reached the wall they discovered
there were no gates on the wall. Our Hero
looked up and yelled "How am I supposed to get part this!" When would
he figure out that to get past this wall he has to climb over it. "You
mean to tell me I have to scale this thing?" Yeah that's
right. "It's a
good thing I have supreme wall climbing skills." That was great and all
but behind them lurked more ancients than they could count. Princes
turned around and shuttered "w-what?" With their
backs against the wall they were facing what seemed to be an endless amount of
enemies. With the
ancients advancing forward they assumed their fighting stance. Our Hero's
companion sprinted forward creating a field around him some would call a super
sayian. "I have
no idea what that is but it's really cool"
Don't worry
Our Hero it's from another story. "Oh I
got you." Our Hero's
companion drove through ancient after ancient with no resistance. Princes
turned to Our Hero. "Go! We'll hold them off." "Are
you sure about this?" "Yes!
We'll be fine you have to get over the wall and you can't do it if they're
chasing you." Our Hero
nodded and began to scale the wall. Princes returned to the fray swinging away
causing a hailstorm of glyphs to rain down. Our Hero
looked down "I have no clue what any of that stuff is but it looks
awesome!" Maybe one day he'll read some stories and find out. But for now
he had to focus on climbing such a massive barrier. It's a good thing he
remembered those wall climbing skills. "I knew
you'd like that." The higher
up he went the stronger the wind became and the harder it was to stay griped to
the wall. His fingers clenched harder and harder even under strenuous fatigue,
arm after arm lift after lift he rose higher up the wall and the combat below
him was becoming vague. "What's
going on down there?" He looked down. "Oh
it's not a good idea to look down!" The hight he had climbed was
impressive but there still was a ways to go. He climbed
for a few minutes and now he had reached the low hanging clouds. He couldn't
see anything but the wall in front of him; The wind began to whistle in his
ear; frost was biting the tip of his fingers, toes and noes. Exhaustion
had set in when he began to hear voices, at first it was unclear and vague what
the voice was but it soon became clear what it was. It was the
wise old man trying to speak to Our Hero. "Our
Hero!" He said it in a ghostly manor. "Why
are you talking like a ghost?" "To be
spooky." "Well
it's not very spooky." "You're
not even going to question how I'm taking to you right now?" "Not
unless how you’re talking to me can help me get over this wall." "No it
can't, but I'm here to tell you something about how far you've come in your
journey and how much of a better person you've become." "There's
no way that's what you wanted to say." "Yeah I
felt obligated to say that, what I really wanted to tell you was that you've
made it further than any other adventurer before you." "Even
further than you?" Yes even
further than me. I did not have the strength or the courage to get past this
point." "Get to
the point; what are you trying to tell me?" "What
in trying to say is you have to do what no one else before you could. No one has
been able to get past the fourth wall and you’re so close to doing it." "Why is
it so important to get past the fourth wall? Why have so many people tried to
do this? Is what's
beyond this wall really worth all of this trouble?" "What
lies beyond this wall is said to be able to change the world, it could be
knowledge or a powerful tool but whatever it is will forever change the world
we live in." "That's
not really convincing." "Well
it should be. How about this, once people know you've been beyond the fourth
wall you will become unimaginably famous and wealthy. So much so people will
sing songs of your story for generations." "That's
a little more convincing. I still don't fully understand everything but for
some reason I feel it will be all worthwhile." "It
will be trust me." And with
that the voice in the wind died away and faded turning into a howl of the wind. He could
almost see the top of the wall from where he was.
His limbs
felt like lead as he moved up the wall. The top of the wall came closer and
closer with every reach being harder than the last. "You
know this would be a lot easier if you didn't make me so tired." But where's
the struggle if you could easily climb the wall. "I
didn't want a struggle I just wanted to get over the wall." Well you're
going to have to work for it. "I've
worked pretty hard; I don't need you making it any harder." Well it's
going to get harder; the last few meters of the wall were warped to form an overhang. "Really!" When he
reached the warped part of the wall he couldn't hold his legs to the wall and
began to dangle. High above the ground his feet hung in the air, his fingers
were barely gripping to the surface. He
persevered though and continued to make progress. The top was so close he
thought he could make it but he reached too far and slipped. He quickly swung
for anything he could grab to save him, his fingers scraped the top but
couldn't catch anything. His fall
stopped suddenly though and he was suspended in the air being held up by some
mysterious force. "Umm
what is going on?" It's the
plot continuity. You weren't supposed to fall so it saved you. "If I
wasn't supposed to fall than why did I?" The narrator
may or may not have changed the story a little for entertainment reasons. "You
did what!" Never mind
what I did just get back on the wall. "How?" Just reach
out your arm. "Alright"
Our Hero reached out his arm and floated back toward the wall. He regained his
grip on the warped wall and finished the climb. He pulled
himself over the top of the wall and laid on the surface of the wall. When he
looked up he didn't see a vast landscape stretching to the horizon but instead
he saw something else.
What he saw
when he looked up appeared to be a great giant staining at him. He looked up
and saw a giant block of text, it was backwards and he did his best to read it. "What
he saw when he looked up appeared to be a great giant staring at him. He looked
up and saw a giant block of text, it was backwards and he did his best to read
it. Um you have some explaining here to do." ...... "Um
narrator please explain this to me." ......... "You
going to say something or am I jus-" Our Hero you don't know what you've
just found. "No I
don't that is where you come in." It's not a
giant. It's the reader, they're reading your story right now. "That's
the reader?" Yes can't
you see what's above you is the text of the story. "Woah
woah woah then what's that all the way out there behind them?" That's the
readers imagination, that's what the reader thinks the world looks like. "So
who's that guy on the wall over there?" That you, or
at least what the reader thinks of you. "Really?"
Our Hero waved and the man in the other wall waves in sync with him. Our Hero
looked up at the reader. "So I can see the reader but can the reader see
me?" No the
reader can't see you they can only see the you on the other side. "What
would happen if I tried this?" Our Hero began to run toward the edge if
the wall but he ran into another invisible wall stopping him from going any
farther and knocking him to the ground. "What
just happened?" You hit the
edge of the world. You can't go any farther because that's what separates our
world from theirs. "Their
world? You mean the readers world?" Yes the reader’s
world. He sat in
silence looking up at the reader. He broke the
silence after a moment. "So
this is what's beyond the fourth wall." So beyond
the fourth wall is the reader. "Yeah
but why would they want to build a giant wall." So no one
would break the fourth wall. "Why
would they build a wall if the point of the wall is to not be broken? Why
wouldn't they just not build the wall?" No to
protect the other fourth wall. "What
do you mean the other fourth wall? Aren't I on the fourth wall?" Don't you
understand the fourth wall you our standing on was built so no one would try to
break the invisible fourth wall you ran into. "So let
me get this straight, they built a massive wall to protect an invisible one
separating our world and the reader’s world." That's
correct. "You
said that they didn't want anyone to break the actual fourth wall?" What are you
trying to get at here? "What
I'm trying to get at here is I want to break the fourth wall" Our Hero
what do you not understand about you literally can't break that invisible wall.
"There
has to be a way to break the fourth wall." You
physically can't tear down the fourth wall. The only way you can break the
fourth wall is by acknowledging the reader and that you are just a character in
the writer’s story. "Wait" Now do you
see? "If I'm
a character of the writer......" Yes go on "That
means, my thoughts are that of the writers?" And "What
was that quote on the wall a ways back?" Come on you
can remember it. "Great
minds think a like? No no no." Getting
close. "If I think
there for I am!" "I'm...
I'm not just Our Hero" Our Hero
looked back up at the text above him. "I'm
the writer" That is
where the writer decided to end the story.
The end.
Writers Note: I
would like to thank you the reader first of all I hope you enjoyed reading the
story as much as I enjoyed writing it. I would also like to thank everyone who
helped motivate me through the process of writing this story it meant a lot;
your smiles and interest was real motivational for me to do the story the way
it needed to be done. Ill now move on to
other things about the story. I got the idea for the story one night around 3AM
and I knew I had something so I downloaded a writing app to my phone and wrote
the first few paragraphs to the story. I wanted to kind of play a spoof on
normal adventure tales but add an unusual element to the story. If you have any
feedback feel free to email me at [email protected]. © 2015 Exen EssimoAuthor's Note
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