If Tomorrow Starts Without Me

My own version of " if tomorrow starts without "

If tomorrow's starts without me ... Know that I have lived
If tomorrow starts without me ... Know that I have did
And although I'm still a kid
Tears shall not be shed
Cuz if tomorrow starts without me ... I want my father to know he doesn't have to feel bad
Because he was a great dad
If tomorrow starts without let my sister know I love her
And because I'm in her heart sorrow she shall not show
If tomorrow starts without me, don't be sad.
For I have lived
I have did
I have growed
Only be sad if loyalty is what you did not show.
And although your eyes are low
I will be up in heaving watching down like you all are my show.
So if tomorrow starts without me Please keep your head up
For I am in a happy place and no longer fed up ....
But that's only if tomorrow starts with out Me

Reviews

[Lizardo]

Wonderful poem and it's very interesting, I really like it.
This is a nice pice of work

[FateDictates]

great epic title..a solemn prayer almost/confession? great work

[TheRealYou]

Thank you so much

[Alecia T.]

This is powerful . Knowing a lot of what you've been through this is a very strong poem I'm proud out you 💚

[TheRealYou]

Thank you cousin