Outback Tea

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Open to the unaided eye
burnished horizon
caress the blushing sky
creased landscape
whispering in the wind
scurrilous secrets
longings now old in the day.

 

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Reviews

[Lisasview]

Good morning Freds,
So wonderful to read your sweet poem.. Food for thought early this morning here in Spain as I enjoy your words and my delicious cup of hot cappuccino.
These words sing out to me...my imagination runs wild ...
whispering in the wind
scurrilous secrets
Cleverly written my dear friend.
Enjoyed reading it for the third time...
Metaphors are so wonderful....
Lisa, still in Spain

[redd Brick Keshner]

Thanks dear Lisa, it’s awesome to have breakfast to poetry. Have an awesome day!

[Abhinav]

should have been longer, but who am i to speak
lovely little piece this.
:)

[Ms. Gruye]

great use of imagery to evoke philosophy. viva la