goodbye, robin

goodbye, robin

A Poem by redd Brick Keshner

goodbye, robin

'always and forever'
said one such bear to
threadbare pounding,
rediscovering vow of
innumerable days 
spent together, two
gather together two
distinct awarenesses
both being made one,
always and forever



© 2025 redd Brick Keshner


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This is just so wonderful and true as well. Nicely said

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

redd Brick Keshner

3 Months Ago

Thank you Starr 🙏🏻👍🏻🕊
Starr

3 Months Ago

....not a problem. I"ll have to read more soon
redd Brick Keshner

3 Months Ago

Likewise 😊
A bond that lasts is rare and to be cherished. A beautiful statement of unity beyond time

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

redd Brick Keshner

3 Months Ago

Thanks Soren! 🙏🏻👍🏻🕊
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MCS
Such wisdom in these words.
Thank you


Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

redd Brick Keshner

3 Months Ago

And thank you for voicing that out! You are much appreciated 🙏🏻👍🏻🕊
Aw, this works on so many levels. Loved Pooh bear and Christopher Robin. Always and forever. Simply lovely.

Chris

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

redd Brick Keshner

3 Months Ago

Thanks Chris! Loving how these levels are somehow distinguishable. You are much appreciated,
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Awareness of others...not enough of it to go around...this is a reminder with a smile.
j.

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

redd Brick Keshner

3 Months Ago

Thanks j. Rediscovering that many of life’s essential things are really simple and easy to forget... read more
I love Pooh and the magic that Milne threaded into his stories one of my favorite books was the Tao of Pooh:) well said in these lines!!!

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

redd Brick Keshner

3 Months Ago

Thanks Robert 🙏🏻 There is, I find, an emotional quality to Milne’s work that continues to sp.. read more

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Added on January 1, 2025
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redd Brick Keshner
redd Brick Keshner

Brisbane, West Moreton, Australia



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….socially awkward poet. Childhood stammerer… intentionally driven to writing rather than speaking. And yes, that’s where that vibe is sourced… so your kindness is truly, ge.. more..

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