goodbye, robin

goodbye, robin

A Poem by Red Brick Keshner

goodbye, robin

'always and forever'
said one such bear to
threadbare pounding,
rediscovering vow of
innumerable days 
spent together, two
gather together two
distinct awarenesses
both being made one,
always and forever



© 2025 Red Brick Keshner


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MCS
Such wisdom in these words.
Thank you


Posted 3 Hours Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Red Brick Keshner

56 Minutes Ago

And thank you for voicing that out! You are much appreciated 🙏🏻👍🏻🕊
Aw, this works on so many levels. Loved Pooh bear and Christopher Robin. Always and forever. Simply lovely.

Chris

Posted 11 Hours Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Red Brick Keshner

11 Hours Ago

Thanks Chris! Loving how these levels are somehow distinguishable. You are much appreciated,
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Awareness of others...not enough of it to go around...this is a reminder with a smile.
j.

Posted 16 Hours Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Red Brick Keshner

16 Hours Ago

Thanks j. Rediscovering that many of life’s essential things are really simple and easy to forget... read more
I love Pooh and the magic that Milne threaded into his stories one of my favorite books was the Tao of Pooh:) well said in these lines!!!

Posted 2 Days Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Red Brick Keshner

2 Days Ago

Thanks Robert 🙏🏻 There is, I find, an emotional quality to Milne’s work that continues to sp.. read more

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Red Brick Keshner
Red Brick Keshner

Brisbane, West Moreton, Australia



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Perhaps poetry is the only palpitation of my thoughts and experiences. It becomes a commentary, a puppet theatre on what is observable and discernible from the vast expanse of the human condition. Eac.. more..

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