elemental forge

silence after rain,  
moors unveil rebirth softly,  
tears of renewal.


flickering firelight,  
dreams dance in ashes aglow,  
bushfire lessons burn.


veined stone in wind’s gale,  
shapes dance, bound’ries fade, souls merge,  
created within

Reviews

[MCS]

These words stirred up a lot of images and feelings. Well penned dear poet!

[Sami Khalil]

I like your style, no joke.
Very smooth and deep in the message conveyed. I think you are highly talented.

[redd Brick Keshner]

Thanks Sami, you are much appreciated 🙏🏻🕊

[Sami Khalil]

Yes siiiirrrr. You are welcome Red.

[Pryde Foltz]

I like what this poem does not say but allows the reader to imagine ... love what did make it to the page. Beauty and mystery ... wonderful combination:)

[redd Brick Keshner]

Best I’ve received and much welcomed and appreciated 🙏🏻

[Pryde Foltz]

You can write. There is no doubt about that. There should be more traffic to your page. My experience with the cafe and I have a long one, is to give out lots of reviews and then see who comes to your page. These people will make up your core group of friends on here. I generally return reviews first and then look for new poetry friends. Works for me:)

[redd Brick Keshner]

Thanks for reaching out! This is much appreciated. As for my core group, it does exist; several of whom are still here but not as active as before. A few have gone on before us. And others have migrated elsewhere on the net. So it’s a season of change it appears. What better timing! Thanks again 🙏🏻