near or far of love

All this who-ha about
Distance in relationships
But what of short-distance
Instead of long, or even
Point blank relationships!
Too much space, so-so-ho-hum,
And claustrophobic, let me get
A breathe, tight of chest and
Body parts gone to sleep
Only you can suffer as
Ants crawl on pins and needles;
While all along your love
Looks on with a hurt and
Quizzical look!  So down it goes
You sink in a puddle of woes.
It really don't matter the distance
True love should always pull through.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

We live in a different world my dear friend. My grandparent didn't always agree. But Grandpa told me. Never go to bed angry. They were marry 65 years. I liked the purpose of the poetry. Sometime we must find equal ground. Hold tightly to love. Thank you dear friend for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Red Brick Keshner]

Thank you, my friend, for sharing your thoughts 🙏🏻
Rik