Some things are more important than poems!

Some things are more important than poems!

A Poem by Red Brick Keshner
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Pantoum.

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Some things hold more weight than verses, 

An infant crying to be fed, 

The dog that barks and strains our purses, 

Kettle boils, thoughts left unsaid.


An infant crying to be fed, 

The talk shows rant, elections scream, 

Kettle boils, thoughts left unsaid, 

Viral clips that haunt our dream.


The talk shows rant, elections scream, 

The flashy meal, now stomach churns, 

Viral clips that haunt our dream, 

And all in life, for poetry yearns.


The flashy meal, now stomach churns, 

The dog that barks and strains our purses, 

And all in life, for poetry yearns, 

Some things hold more weight than verses.

© 2024 Red Brick Keshner


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Hi Brick, those lines that are repeated...there is a purpose?

Posted 6 Days Ago


Red Brick Keshner

6 Days Ago

Yeah, pantoum poems have repeated lines probably to reinforce a thought or a feel of a thought, sort.. read more
GlendaK

6 Days Ago

Brilliant. It did just that. Thanks. Ironically, to quiet the baby-a poem(lullaby). To quiet the sto.. read more

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Red Brick Keshner
Red Brick Keshner

Brisbane, West Moreton, Australia



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My life is one poetic journey. If I am not reading or writing poetry, I simply live it. To me the experience of poetry should be such - to breathe it, create it, and receive it from poems and lives th.. more..

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