in echoes wade

in echoes wade

A Poem by redd Brick Keshner

In shadows deep, that bell does toll,  
A whispering wind, a heart grown cold.  
Each chime a memory, softly fell,  
An echo faintly fades in sombre knell.  

Dreams once bright now dimly and pale,  
Like autumn leaves in a mournful gale.  
Yet from the ashes, new life may swell,  
For endings whisper stories yet to tell.

© 2024 redd Brick Keshner


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You are right my dear friend.
"Yet from the ashes, new life may swell,
For endings whisper stories yet to tell."
Old dreams may disappear and we must replace with new ones. Amazing dance or words and thoughts dear poet.
Coyote

Posted 5 Months Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

redd Brick Keshner

5 Months Ago

Let the dance continue on!
Awesome piece kind of has a Robert Frost vibe but that definitely is a good thing. Overall great imagery. A very impressive poem.

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

redd Brick Keshner

5 Months Ago

Thanks Sean, I’m not averse to Frost in any way. Glad to have shared in your thoughts and journey .. read more

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Added on October 21, 2024
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redd Brick Keshner
redd Brick Keshner

Brisbane, West Moreton, Australia



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….socially awkward poet. Childhood stammerer… intentionally driven to writing rather than speaking. And yes, that’s where that vibe is sourced… so your kindness is truly, ge.. more..

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