in memory’s wake

in memory’s wake

A Poem by redd Brick Keshner

Do you remember? Would you know my gait
If only words were left to bear my truth?
While all else lies concealed behind its weight,
Perhaps our thoughts could bridge the loss of Youth.


In conversation’s dance, our souls may meet,
Recalling days when we rode waves of verse.
With every line, their rhythm felt so sweet,
Yet now, it seems we’ve drifted- -just a curse.

 

If only you had shared my silent plight,
To linger in dark echoes of the past,
Would memories ignite like stars at night,
Reminding us that bonds like ours can last?

 

So let us seek those moments once again,
And find the path where poetry began.


© 2024 redd Brick Keshner


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with some relationships, they are like a fire spreading. But then as the flames wither, the poetry loses intensity...and the words we write each other become shallow fragments of what used to be such intense verse.
j.

Posted 6 Months Ago


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redd Brick Keshner

6 Months Ago

How very true!

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redd Brick Keshner
redd Brick Keshner

Brisbane, West Moreton, Australia



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….socially awkward poet. Childhood stammerer… intentionally driven to writing rather than speaking. And yes, that’s where that vibe is sourced… so your kindness is truly, ge.. more..

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