A Familiar Stranger

A Familiar Stranger

A Poem by redd Brick Keshner

A barely audible creak greeted me
As I entered this still unfamiliar place.
His figure approached, step by step, slowly,
Aged and wizened, his steps marked with grace.

But for his slouch, he could be any man,
Now so much smaller than my childhood fear.
Not the monstrous terror of long ago,
A different presence, yet so close, so near.

There I stood, a deer caught in the light,
Shaking off the shadows of my fright,
In the haze of ill-served remembrance,
Realizing that I loved him all along,

A bond transformed by time’s gentle embrace,
From phantom fears to love's enduring song.

© 2024 redd Brick Keshner


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How our perceptions change and with them our feelings. Certain foods that I hated as a child I now love and people that I disliked have become good friends so fears that I once had now are fond memories. Nicely written there is a softness to it that feels like the mists of time and the age that goes with it,

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

redd Brick Keshner

6 Months Ago

Makes for a new experience of old sayings like “with age comes wisdom” and such. Thanks Soren �.. read more



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How our perceptions change and with them our feelings. Certain foods that I hated as a child I now love and people that I disliked have become good friends so fears that I once had now are fond memories. Nicely written there is a softness to it that feels like the mists of time and the age that goes with it,

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

redd Brick Keshner

6 Months Ago

Makes for a new experience of old sayings like “with age comes wisdom” and such. Thanks Soren �.. read more
Aww, this is so good Red. Makes me think of my dad.
But in another direction...it is me. as Sheryl Crow sang "I'm a stranger in my own life"---
j.

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

redd Brick Keshner

5 Months Ago

Thanks GlendaK, your words and visit are much appreciated.
ETERNITY

5 Months Ago

Isn't it strange how we go from fearing that huge strong guy to watching him grow feeble and wither .. read more
redd Brick Keshner

5 Months Ago

Super strange! Most definitely. 🙏🏻

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Added on October 12, 2024
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redd Brick Keshner
redd Brick Keshner

Brisbane, West Moreton, Australia



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….socially awkward poet. Childhood stammerer… intentionally driven to writing rather than speaking. And yes, that’s where that vibe is sourced… so your kindness is truly, ge.. more..

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