be-lightedly
A Poem by Red Brick Keshner
being an unlit candlean unlit match stickwill surely not sufficeneither the twain shall meetunless you strike onethe other remains andunless the lit shall kiss itthe other still abides
© 2024 Red Brick Keshner
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I love the hidden meaning contained in most all of your poems. How many relationships, too shy to reach out to, could have been and burned brightly. How many that were reached out to with courage were lit and do burn bright. It is hard to strike a candle so as the match I can not wait for the other to approach me I have to take the initiative if I want it to be lit. As usual very well done my friend.
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Thanks Soren. Keep safe and ready if you need to reach out to others in you locality.
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I love the hidden meaning contained in most all of your poems. How many relationships, too shy to reach out to, could have been and burned brightly. How many that were reached out to with courage were lit and do burn bright. It is hard to strike a candle so as the match I can not wait for the other to approach me I have to take the initiative if I want it to be lit. As usual very well done my friend.
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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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Thanks Soren. Keep safe and ready if you need to reach out to others in you locality.
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Added on October 8, 2024
Last Updated on October 8, 2024
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Red Brick KeshnerBrisbane, West Moreton, Australia
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My life is one poetic journey. If I am not reading or writing poetry, I simply live it. To me the experience of poetry should be such - to breathe it, create it, and receive it from poems and lives th.. more..
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