branches of a tree

shape poem

Reviews

[Chris Shaw]

Beautifully visual. Love the shape of your chosen words. Makes me think of children leaving home. Makes me think of my dearly departed. Those empty nests leave you feeling hollow. Your writing touched my emotions this morning. Thank you Freds.

Chris

[redd Brick Keshner]

Glad of it in the midst of the sorrow that it can illumine. Thank you Chris for validating the essence of this poem.
Freds.

[Chris Shaw]

Your poem touches a nerve for those who still mourn. The sorrow never leaves. You just learn to live with it.

[redd Brick Keshner]

May hap in their little ways poems accompany us in a life journey of grieving.

[Chris Shaw]

They express mostly what we are unable to speak out loud. What we suffer in silence. I am thankful for poetry. It has been a blessing on my journey Freds.

[Soren]

An inspiring format of a visual nature. Great wording as well and a splendid ending Loved the "fly free, an empty nest is all you'd see."

[redd Brick Keshner]

Truly glad the words got a “great wording.” The more restrictions make it much more difficult to craft. Thanks so much Soren.

[emmajoygreen]

This post is extraordinarily created, considered and offered: its content brief but a tome of real consolation. Perhaps the way you have mentioned freedom, the exit that has its own way touches hearts and with subtle thought rather than excess

[redd Brick Keshner]

Thanks kindly ejg, may the blessings of a new year fill your days afresh.

[emmajoygreen]

Many thanks, 'need all the blessings going!