To exist is a gift from wherever its source.. but to live and multiply there must be air. love and yes, water.. Your poem says it all: however placed, your thoughts are consistent- gifts given, care paramount. Green is growth, without water there is dun nothing.. false creation that disappears into nothing. Nothing
To exist is a gift from wherever its source.. but to live and multiply there must be air. love and yes, water.. Your poem says it all: however placed, your thoughts are consistent- gifts given, care paramount. Green is growth, without water there is dun nothing.. false creation that disappears into nothing. Nothing
Light and air, providing it isn’t polluted. My mind wandered. I can’t star gaze as much as I did. Pollution everywhere. I am enjoying your shape poems. I appreciate the skill in presentation Freds. I have plants everywhere in my home. I like to be surrounded by nature and I do nurture them. They need water.
Chris
Posted 1 Year Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
1 Year Ago
Thanks Chris, when we have the essentials everything else falls into place!
Freds
let me give this poem some water...it is a sharp shape poem...I want to sustain its existence
so it can be read for a long time.
Posted 1 Year Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
1 Year Ago
Thanks j. For a poem to have its staunch proponents is to possess in seed form a sustenance for its .. read moreThanks j. For a poem to have its staunch proponents is to possess in seed form a sustenance for its germinate progeny. Water is life and this is the best gift to give and receive. Cheers 🙏🏻
….socially awkward poet. Childhood stammerer… intentionally driven to writing rather than speaking. And yes, that’s where that vibe is sourced… so your kindness is truly, ge.. more..